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Old 12-01-03, 07:45 PM   #1
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Just a Couple of beats

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just looking for some decent feedback

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/jawsmccraccon.htm
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Old 12-04-03, 12:50 PM   #2
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i wasent feeling the first song, i dont know but it didnt seenm to have any emotion in it, the secound song was whole lot better, the pianos were cool and the grove was nice. the love song joint reminded me of a early 90ties joint but in a good way keep working on those beats 1
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Old 12-04-03, 10:16 PM   #3
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I FREESTYLED TO THAT SHIT THE WHOLE TIME I LISTENED TO IT.... ITS GOOD TO ME
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Old 12-04-03, 11:36 PM   #4
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I only heard the first one..it was allright what are you working with keyboard beat, machine, and what else?
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Old 12-04-03, 11:59 PM   #5
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list'n to all three.

first was ok. ye....hook could have been a bit better.

second was nice. everythin but the whiplash hits before the snare...n the snare was really washed out. a higher quality snare sound would have been better.

thrid was smooth. fell this, except the bass. sequence/sound is a bit to bumpin compared to the flow of everythin else in the song. drums r nice thou. tight shit cept for the bass.

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