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12-04-03, 04:37 AM
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'4 Da Tru Niggaz'
IP: CB99 8D63
this for my true niggerz the 1's that live bak in the getto
every day's a fucking struggle, too get food or a lil doe but it dont matter coz most of the world is corrupted in poverty the reason i started rapping was to get this demon out of me i give it up to them niggaz that stay tru to game represent there klik and huller fuck the fame so hard to live in this life, wanted to take that nine but when i tried all i could picture is my family eyes in my mind giving back to society what they gave to us nigger r lifes consist of fucking hoes getting nines and taking doe niga cant deny where u came from, are destiny’s to die nigger no one loves us, so lifes so hard to live nigga tell me why do all these niggaz have too die by the nine we only men like the white man why we declined to go to school be accepted an fuck this segregation we aint never ever gonna have white black love in this nation so why niggers get arrested and girls get raped and rkelly fucks kids, and his shit gets taped mother fucker, there aint never gonna be any kinda piece accept when the nine kills me, only piece wehen ima deceased http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96049 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96354 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96317 lord answer my call I wanna ball and get High nobody wanna live in pain, mayne I would rather die dislocate my neck just to feel what death feels like but never take my life nigger, coz I know what pains like to see my family shed tears over my death, I could never put my niggers through that shit, and see them down under when I was young boy I wished I was white, yeah its tru niga mayn life was fukd up and crazy,an poverty tuchd me niga I wasted so much time, learning how to pop that trigger that my mind drifted from the right line,2 gettin bigger Daym, life aint all bad if you got family who loves you Or a bitch too say it to yo face, baby ima wich you When I die god, mann I don’t give a fuck if its hell or heaven Coz ima keep on doing what I do, till ima hit that 7 Last edited by 80SHOTS : 12-04-03 at 07:48 AM. |
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12-04-03, 07:27 AM
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IP: FF40 570D
Thank You ..
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Fuck you Last edited by Edicius : 12-04-03 at 09:16 AM. |
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12-04-03, 02:36 PM
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..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
pretty good piece, creativbe you had some good flow and a lot of creative wordplay keep it uo man
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12-04-03, 03:22 PM
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IP: 340D 8B8F
Yeah i agree this was a pretty good piece....your structure was pretty decent, could be improved on a little though, but it was good....your vocab in this was alright it could be a bit better though....Flow in this was pretty good i thought, stayed on most of the time....overall this was a good piece...keep at it.
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