8-10 linez
No d/r,crew votez
No bitin or any otha shit
Blind spit

I'm checkin in...

Peace

wrong 1 erase this and i already made 1

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95868

oops ok nvm i'll erase minez....lets go playa.....................checkin in................................................ .................................................. .....

I'm jus gonna go for some herbal enurishment AAAIght...I'll spit in 30

Peace.....................

Losses drop down on this kid,faster than his matrix sig/
Even if this bitch had a dick enlarger,he still couldn't make-it-big/

Toner from the UK?,yep,because he just got Unbelievably Killed/
I just burnt this kid up,now he like "Damn I Should Of Chilled/

Even If you wash ur lines in "wash away your sins soap",your lyrics still aint good/
walks out with a white shirt.walks in with a red t-shirt,tellin his parents "that aint blood"/

Go ahead take 30 mins to get your pre-written,you still can't beat me/
Even if you put your keyboard in the oven,you still aint typin hot shit,G/

This kids fake,like a King with no crown/
Toner was up before,but he just got TONED DOWN/

damn...started off ok...but sall good i through sum wordplay in there and shit

wordplay-even if you got a dick enlarger,you still aint makin-it-big
and
I just burnt this kid up,now he like "Damn I Should Of Chilled/

lez
w8
for
him!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I'm Too Gone fo this

R.I.P tha fag C Rocka...I've already killed, lyrical autospy like a doctor,
Takin off like a Helicopter, but Rocka I stopped ya...from elevatin like I jus dropped ya,
This kid believes he's a prodigy...shallow rymes, he's alien wiv philosophy,
Don't get ma lines without photograhy...If ya cry at the next line, fuck an apology,
Break ya fake style down an reintvent ya..It's like ya bitch slapped, an didn't meant ta,
I shoulda been tha doctor's mentor...abort this child, gave birth to just a placenta,
Wake up to reality...this kid needs votes...RBs not a fuckin charity,
Fo this pre adolesent it doesn't end happily...Fuck tha finisher, We already got...Fatality.

Peace.

yobreak down
openr-c
wordplay-c
punches-c
metas, none really
structure- tie, you both need to work on structure
closer-c

honest vote- c................................
keep elevatin both of y'as............... damn c you got mad skillz

good battle both of you, props to ya both.................................
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it was indeed a good battle but c rocka were more ill than toner....
i like that line............this kid is fake like a king with no crown.......
toner was up before now he just got tone down........

this was a good battle hard to judge my vote lets see when i break it down....
Flow: Tie
Punches C rocka
Personals: C rocka
Vocab Toner
Opener:Toner
Finisher:Toner
Creativity:Tie

Over all i think toner took this batle C rocka had some great lines but they were some played ones as well but he dropped a hot verse...props to both ye

Vote Toner

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

thanx dawg lets get these votes in!!!!!........................................... .................................................. ................................i will return favours

im goin like this both verses were hot, but rockas style, and punches gave him the edge, especially the line about keyboard in the oven, and the king with the crown,......... my vote C,,,,, holla

c-rocka took this ere

punches-c
flow-c
personals-c
metas-tie
structure-c
overall-c

quite gud battle ere but c-rocka just outclassed toner slightly wiv some clever thought through lines,

cud u 2 plz hit up the battle in my sig wiv an honest vote, thanx