aight


You spit first
10-15 lines
normal house rules



i will pm you the link to this battle
if noone shows up by tonight
he is DQed and takes the lose

peace and goodluck

checking in



i'll spit after your done




peace



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Checkin' in. I'll drop in about twenty.
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Nothing's worse than an emcee named after what he's bad at making/ (Rhymes)
It's like if an impotent man were to call himself fucking "babies"/

I refuse to sign the truce when rhymes already hangs from the gallows in a noose/
Even though the rope was loose his neck still cracked like a pair of ceramic shoes/
Even if he wrote pre-writes, he still wouldn't have rhymes to use/
He's like the Chicago Cubs in that it's his destiny to lose/

You came to get down so i bound you in rope and threw you off a cliff until i heard you hit the ground/
Couldn't decide which was a more sickening sound: your rhymes or the fleshy pound/
My rhymes hit you like a plummeting anvil as you daffy DUCKed down/
Buried you in a mound but when i digged you up later, only BUGS were found/

Rhymes is like a jewish person smoking on Christmas without a doubt/
Santa Claus may go into the chimney, but only Hannuka Harry comes out/

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Sorry, some explanation if it's really needed.

The Chicago Cubs lose all of the time because of some curse supposedly.
The wordplay is a take-off on loony tunes.
The last line is like the holocaust...smoke comes out of the chimney. It's alright, i'm jewish so i'm allowed to make those jokes.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

yo i'm not sure how long ago u wrote if anything sorry i took long...

Ima merk Meters untill he's a undisclose discription...
I'm like a docture fill you up a new prescription...

Teach you a lesson this mic is wet, like a bitch you suck...
You jus through the ammo im your gun you better duck...

Rip out your vocal cords do everyone the favour...
With rhymes like that it adds another victory with flavour...

Dissin my name wen the prof is said and just...(justified)
Add another win this newb is nothin i ever seen before blow you off like dust...

End this up with a mic kill with three pill of extacy...
Cusse this mutha fuckin fag standin next to me...




"I'm like a docture fill you up a new prescription..." it means add one more lose to his score board

peace

punches====meters
flow====meters
werd play====meters
rhyme scheme=====rhymes
overall====meters
meters' was the illest
vote=meters

Opening: Meters
Punches:Meter
Personals: neither really but meter was betta.
Flow: Meters
Closing: Meters

No contest. Ur really doing well since I merked u meters :-p haha good job bud - peace

Haha, thanks for the vote HeadWrecka but you merked me? I don't think so dawg. Haha. Actually. Yeah, you did fucking merk me. Anyway, UPPIN..............
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Punches: Meters
Disses: Rhymes
Personals: Meters
Wordplay: Meters only by a meter or so
Metas: Meters
Multis: Meters
Creativity: Rhymes

Vote: Meters

this battle was ok..nothin really hit hard..

meter was medocre until his second paragraph..he hit with some iight punches...the rest was so so...s closer sucked!!

rhymes verse was soft..nothin stood out either..very basic..punches were lackluster..both need to elevate

vote meters

upping third time
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Upping 5..
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__________________
tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder