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House of Crackers
IP: 40E9 F947
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Sand Liba Dee D-chillz Their is a predator running loose in america's 50 states/ blasting his way to da capital, D.C ,wit no time to waste/ he gotta detonate in a point blank range, on top of da stage/ begins to drop da flows like 10feet of snow, killin mr. plow/ with da verbal artillary alternating randomly, pumpin da crowd/ Who be this alien being creating havoc in da white house?/ its da snakeyes fu, and now you know, so go tell someone hoe/ Cuz this is a spit of unexpected shit representing mexico/ the land of the fifth sun, aztec nation comin wit a creation/ top sensation like an american idol, but da bitch is on vacation/ time to step in and show these ignorant people how to get down/ with these funky sounds, smokin everybody out wit an ounce/ keepin da shit alive like dr.frankenstein, creating a monster / some people may feel this and othas just get wack by a mobster/ yeah, no topic needed to install this thesis, i eat haters like reces/ pieces of shit dat don't peep game, thinkin this flow be lame/ fuckem, they will never learn to understain my methods/ I got all da answers, so fuck yall questions, leave yall guessin/ who was dat magnificent 27 blastin out at capitol hill aggressive/ no, its not your oridanary rapper, or a van damm kidnapper/ its da predator with da eyes of a serpent, fiery burning/ got da house of representatives turning as i start counting/ i be goddam, not a brown or a black man own a seat in this pad/ just a white vote, opinions with no minority hope, so sad/ |
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IP: C1DA C961
u went off subject like i do alot dawg so keep your shit in focus and work on structure
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Word.
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IP: 63D7 39EF
This was ok....structure was alright, could be touched up a bit in a few areas though...Vocab was alright, could be up'd though...try working on your multies though, add some to this....flow in this was alright...but overall this was ok....keep at it.
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1E
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IP: 5AF5 5CA5
think ya elevating since ya last couple of drops...jus keep working on ya complexity...internals n multis all the way thru....really set a rhyme off....but the way it is its a decent drop...pZ...
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IP: F914 0269
Flow: 7
Internals: 0 Multis: 0 Enjoyment: 6.5 |
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Banned: Spamming
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IP: 4577 CD9A
..descent..not bad..but it could've been alot better..your flow was alright..and wordplay was there..but..you drifted off a little..
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