10-12 lines

u spirt first
ill drop soon..
maybe before u i startin now..

checkin

no D r votes..

WUT A PUSSY
DUK IT FAG

CLOSE THis if he aint showin.......................................
u say u want to battle me..an u dont even show......

thats why i quit text......fags like u

yo man shut up bitch I'm here checkin in dsl was fucked up..............................................

k
u droppin or wut
................checkin in ill drop in a few now that i saw u checke in u spit first like u said

yo check it,

If the Mic was a Match you couldn't Spit a Spark on it
smoke ya... cuz if I beat ya ass yo prolly NARC On IT (Narcotic)
Act hard cuz You an actor... But I'm the 1 dat Play N Mc
U got my Pipe in ya mouth... don't mean U "Blaze N Mcs"
All ya losses DQ's... you beg ya Homies for Votes on AIM
one of em F'd up and PM'd so U got caught & DQ'd again
gun Sqeez Off... look like you dancin cuz I made ya Knee Pop
dumbass... drowned himself when he tried to Sea-Walk
always Ride my dick so hard, you got me Saddle-Strappin
The best dis you posted was before the Battle happened

good luck playa

Wished me good luk hopin id wish u the same.
but the only time this wak mc wrappin nice is when christmas came..

Damn kid.u make it seem it aint oblivious they way those punches are rehearsals.
I no newbs are gunna vote but sum no wuts a fake personal..

Pipe in my mouth.r u serious if u forcing it dont spit at all..
Cuz it dont matter how much u advertise this battle u aint spittin spitacular.

This mite be breaking news to u but u cudnt drop a hard disc..
Wit those flows i realized the meanng of a starving artist.

My verse is more siccer then ya moms strecthed marks..
Im takin this bruisin ego cat to school before the test starts..

i flex marks that get served...like radiation..I heat "mics"..
you're outta my league..just like an MLB strike..

ENDER..
my flows are dangerous liek my savagery my strategry is cauzin cancer..
This kids sexuality.like the 76ers wit out A I they aint got the answer.
ya cant rap properly, my bars jack u like armed robbery..
im leavin this vetern shookin like muhammad ali..

yea went past 12 tryin ta save ya ass herb




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Opening = narcotic
Closer = Narcotic
Punches = both
Structure = Both
Flow = Narcotic
Wordplay = Both

Vote = Narcotic


Both Yall Please Hit Up My Battle With some Honest Votes ok..and ill Be Glad To Give honest votes For Yall 2 Whenever Ya Battle

Thanx

Peace

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sweet battle yall
flow-narcotics
opener-narcotics
closer-narcotics
body-narcotics
personals-spitacular
multies-spitacular

vote-Narcotics

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Spitacular Vote For my Battle honestly I Voted For Your man

Come On Yall Repay The Favour ill Always Vote On your Battles to

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100200

Peace

Structure- $pitacular
Opener- $pitacular (dat personal merked nar's christmas punch)
Closer- nar (liked dat iverson punch)
Multies- Nar
Punches- $pitacular (Nar, u structure is makin ur punches weaker, ur lines are like...
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Vote- $pitacular

Alrite, hit me up wit sum honest votes with the battles in my sig plz. thx.

If the Mic was a Match you couldn't Spit a Spark on it
smoke ya... cuz if I beat ya ass yo prolly NARC On IT (Narcotic)

^^ok intro

Act hard cuz You an actor... But I'm the 1 dat Play N Mc
U got my Pipe in ya mouth... don't mean U "Blaze N Mcs"

^haha nice.

All ya losses DQ's... you beg ya Homies for Votes on AIM
one of em F'd up and PM'd so U got caught & DQ'd again

^^ O_O nice ass personal if its true.

gun Sqeez Off... look like you dancin cuz I made ya Knee Pop
dumbass... drowned himself when he tried to Sea-Walk

^^filler first line. second line had me dying

always Ride my dick so hard, you got me Saddle-Strappin
The best dis you posted was before the Battle happened

^ouch nice closer.




Wished me good luk hopin id wish u the same.
but the only time this wak mc wrappin nice is when christmas came..

^^hmm..ill chris wrap line..hmm

Damn kid.u make it seem it aint oblivious they way those punches are rehearsals.
I no newbs are gunna vote but sum no wuts a fake personal..

^^nice

Pipe in my mouth.r u serious if u forcing it dont spit at all..
Cuz it dont matter how much u advertise this battle u aint spittin spitacular.

^^filler first line, ok second line

This mite be breaking news to u but u cudnt drop a hard disc..
Wit those flows i realized the meanng of a starving artist.

^^erm

My verse is more siccer then ya moms strecthed marks..
Im takin this bruisin ego cat to school before the test starts..

^^erm

i flex marks that get served...like radiation..I heat "mics"..
you're outta my league..just like an MLB strike..

^^erm.

ENDER..
my flows are dangerous liek my savagery my strategry is cauzin cancer..
This kids sexuality.like the 76ers wit out A I they aint got the answer.
ya cant rap properly, my bars jack u like armed robbery..
im leavin this vetern shookin like muhammad ali..

OK closer i guess.


IF I COULD VOTE. Definatly Spitacular. I found his verse a tad bit more humorous and his shit was on point.

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