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Envious Hate by Token and Edicius

Token

Two different worlds colliding when Jealousy emerges
Evil rises from tempers, There's even hell in the churches
Fall victim of violence... and Fall victim of envy
Sure you can sit on me but the question is, can you stand me
Hating is easy.. It takes no thinking it's a no brainer
I attract more hate.. Than a human blood drive container
We all got hatred flowing throughout our gene pool
But it's up to you to let it flow out or just be cool
Pointless hate leads to pointless deaths amongst us
Uncontrollable anger leads to creating real life monstas
Don't stroll through life without being in control of your temper
Don't surrender, Give way to life and your temper shall slender

Edicius

Hate me , like ugly people hate the sun!
i dont care, im gonna keep goin on and on..
U cant stand the fact..that ur not me..nope u cant!
but thats a little bitch for u aint it? im like a fish walking thru land
But u can't..u feel so down, like a tear droppin of a face from a clown
But the circus has left..u have been robbed! what a brutal theft..damn!
So better pay me! i will predict, ur future im a fortune teller...
right..hate me ..cuz i write, it ends as a BestSeller..
U cant stand! it like people in a wheelchair..
u cry like newborn babies..u think its unfair!
Well thats ur god damn bad..im destiny this is ur faith..
ur end up like a homeless..i will have the cash so go on & hate!

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

felt this, was hot collab, at first i wasn't so sure about the topic, but it came out well, both used nice vocab good flow such and such, no complaints will be comming from me, was hoping to do a more in-depth review but i'm in a little of a hurry, maybe later, peep my open mic with skiddz, its called st-st-stutter

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Soft Focus
Suicide Inc.
RhymeVantage
Def.Ill
Ghost-Writers

Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

token, had a nice flow going with some nice multis....stayed on topic...thought ya closer was good, maybe a bit long..
edicius, different flow going fell a bit but.good., quite simple vocab but seemed to go nicely with what you was saying, again some nice multis....
....thought your different styles went well together ...good collab..pZ.....

reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread, or it gets deleted.
thanks.

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Life isn't a bitch...
she's just sick of being personified -Sage Francis

^I told him that

Geez ..still postin without...

Ne ways this was a collab for fun .. = )

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Fuck you

^^^ I Could Tell That By Your Verse Edicius. . First Line Was Funny. . "Hate Me Like Ugly People Hate The Sun" Bahaha. You Had A Good Flow. . Simple Vocab, But That Didn't Matter With The Playful Concept You Had. Token. . Great Flow, Good Content. Vocab And Multi's Were Fine, And Ya Closer Was Dope. . Overall, I Was Feelin This Collab. . Keep Um Droppin. .

-Formula.

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nice piece flow was good multis and punches ight wordplay good and vocab good over all 7.5/10

^So nice, 7.5 for a 1 minute key..yup yup ..

Up^

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Fuck you

^ Word.. up up and away

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Respect is all I'm after.
Prime effort is all you can expect.
Perfection will be promised in time.

The Creation

Up^

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Fuck you

Edicius came off the better of the two..

Both had good flow, It was almost equa, I was feeling the sme vibes, both had a god take on this, no extremely good concepts or takes, but edicius's wordplay made me laugh

Hate me , like ugly people hate the sun!

Good to see your using it now.. How

Pz.

Illest lines of this open mic were:
Two different worlds colliding when Jealousy emerges
Evil rises from tempers, There's even hell in the churches

lol

anyway token nice flow multies well formed vocab down packed
topic was present and never fell off good read nice

edicious nice flow vocab seem to fluctuate topic was present and never fell off topic was a very good read

good team work

please can both of you hit up my open mic in sig titled: untangible evil

thanks man peace