10 lines
10 mins
no crew
no hate
no d/r

aiight checkin in,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

checkin in
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I’ma leave this cat wit more disabilities than a premature birth//
This nigga is a discrace to tha world like like hes he owns the earth//
Look at my verse he can be micheal Jackson and still couldn’t be it//
Nigga u better pay attention tha nigga that ur battling is undefeated//
His name is c-lo cause is skills are below average like those a a midget//
U can have hands like Muhammad ali and yo punches still wouldn’t hit//
This is juss a lil 10 min diss that bout to blow yo mind up like bombs//
Check his sig when that last time u eva heard any 1 still dissin momz//
This cat is gay mmy gat bout to leave his brains on the cold sidewalk//
Have this fakeass wannabe getting his body outlined wit white chalk//

so u call ur self hannibal lector/
when really u just faggot with a pocket protector about to get his first loss on his record/
I'll stick lyrics like knives in each of ur organs in alphabetical order/
u can hear it tonight, im grindin on u, if it was thearetical u could be a skateboarder/
im droppin a bomb on this bitch causin u nothin but disorder, at mickey Ds sayin "hi can i take ur order"/
my flows sicka than the aids epidemic/
when ur rhymes are really just jokes and gimmicks/
u couldnt key a hot track if ur hands were oven mits/
ur flow so cold causin urself chapped dick/
i just exploded like ur appendix go on try to mend this, its over and u cant hold my pocket on the track bitch/

nice battle man, this should be good,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, holla at me......................

line 3 is suppose to say:
Look at my verse he can be micheal Jackson and still couldn’t beat it//


VOTE USING THIS:

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complexity:
structure:

Vote:

uppin 4 votes
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vote - Hannibal

Structure - Hannibal
Wordplay - Hannibal Edges it.
Opener - C-Lo
Closer - Hannibal
Complexity - C-Lo
Vocabularity - Hannibal
Punchlines - Hannibal
Flow - Hannibal

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Structure - Hannibal
Wordplay - tie
Opener - C-Lo
Closer - C-Lo
Complexity - C-Lo
Vocabularity - Hannibal
Punchlines - Hannibal
Flow - C-Lo

vote- C-Lo

Structure - Hannibal
Wordplay - Hannibal
Opener - C-Lo
Closer - Hannibal
Complexity - C-Lo
Vocabularity - Hannibal
Punchlines - Hannibal
Flow - Hannibal

i will be back to poll when i get 100+ posts

can ya'll post honest votes on my battle.. they are being sleept
if you dont have 100+ post then wrtie who u think won.. consider it an upping...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96977
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96981

thank you..

punches: h
flow: h
vocab: h
wwordplay: h
complexity: h
structure: h

Vote: h

no hate jus a vote

peace