(These lyrics been written by me an my homeboy shizzle, and respect all feedback. help me elevate thats why i'm here, piece!)

REPLIED TO: VYLENT-STALKER, GAZANOVA, D11-J



80SHOTS:
the effects of tha hood can cripple you and kill you
like a model, the sun may tan, it might burn you
i got my own flow, but still i need my own doe
fuck bad time records i crumble u up an smoke u like po
see them bitches be saying i be spitting the word nigga too much
what you know bitch, u lived easy my life was tough
but it all good though i hate useing long words coz i go crazy
coz 2way dont take my kindness 4 weaknes coz u pussy
i spit at any pussy that i wanna fucking choose
5hifty you fucking fake 50cent, stop trying be in his shoes
tapping at my keyboard hullering fuck you, i got nuthin 2loose
2way you aint freeway,bitch ima break yo jaw wit my tools

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Shizzle:
time 4 me to bust at the next flipping snitch/
ready to get me arrested so u can ball bitch/
dislocate yo backbown and send you on a long trip/
ask michael jordan who responsible 4 breaking hiz hip/
wen i spit i just dont give a shit/
my mayne aint as aggresive at me wen it comes to skits/
coz shots keeps it verbal, fuck it i bust fist/
fuck the glok, i rape yo sister in the ice cold mist/
look in my eyes and tell me do u really wanna beef lsd/
Longer Surving Dons for ever, till i die by tha 12 shotti/
verbally and lyrically maybe the best hustler in tha game/
drugs turn into money, and in this life lsd will reign/
doctor nurse or worker some1 please help me/
i see dead people, and my raps bring misery/
lil kids copying what i say and now they wanna be strapped/
common man i never ment 4 dis shit to happen/
somehow i dont see u being up 2 my lever niga/
sumfin about me that makes u shiva/
if i get killed in coldblood ima comeback to haunt ya/
coz like the devil, ahh fuck it, fuck luecifer/

80SHOTS:
i already showed u juniors 20 shots of pain
so much peeps playing simon says, taking names
must b 1 bowcat name marina who cant get off my dick
this bitch be haiting shots, till she fucking sick
i aint like shizzle i know the nigga would kill ya
instead i give yo sister some pills so i can fuck her
ima grim reaper, i suppose u can calll me dirty
coz if you left any of you hoes wit me, i sanp there virginity
probably die b4 my time but i reall dont give a fuck g
coz before i do ima fuck jennifer lopez an hal berry
c i take every day as it comes, or i'll die crazy
fucked up on coke, or suffering flashback from lsd
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.....PEEPS I KNOW THIS WAS SHORT, BUT THE WHOLE IDEA WITH ME AND MY BROTHER SHIZZLE IS TO ELEVATE, VOTE WHO U THINK HAD THA BEST LINES AND FLOWS!, PIECE, THANKS

waaats up, now listen juz coz shots is my big brother i aint gonna be easy on im,...check it...

yo flow was ok bruv but u need to keep practising and keep writing then u'll b better, yo rhymes ok could be worked on more,
shizzle, your rhymes were heavy bro they rhymed well and yo wordplay was cool outta both of u i would say shizzle gets it, sorry bruv but u need to elevate cuz, piece

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This was a alright collab here....both of you had pretty good structure, maybe use a bit of a touch up though...try adding some multies into this to help the flow out and to make it better...flow was ok from both of you just try adding some multies like i said before...but just work on your stuff and keep elevating..and keep at it.