aight peep this ...

Not sure if I like all the sqences of the notes on the melodys ... so not sure if to keep it or change it a bit... eather way it can be changed.

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"the March"

Peace

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the THIRD note of the intro melody/loop is not quantized (placed) correctly, it comes in too quick.

something is catchy about this beat. and then something is cheesy about it. im like not sure if i wanna march into battle, or turn off my speakers.

lol

fix that note though

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..ghost...

thanks dawg.... Yea I feel the same way about it too.. Like im not sure if I like it or not...

Peace

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coo....different. like the clap n the marchin snares. melody is chill. build up to the vchorus is smooth. i hear fain't snare roll in there at points....maybe turn that up a bit, or add a different roll in to make the marchin snares roll a bit more.

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