Yo if i could turn back the hands of time,
this would be what i would do,
i would go back in time and make sure that u know i love u,
and that no man will ever love you as much as i do,
and again this isnt a poem its a rhyme,
thats what i would do if i could turn back the hands of time

the fact that im so far away is unreal,
but if i could turn back the hands of time to be with you i will,
and if you wanted me to i would write poems that you can feel,
even though i hate writin them i would do it for you still
thats what i would do if i could turn back the hands of time like a wheel

if i had to give up rap all togeather just for you to see,
that all i want to do is have you beside me,
i wouldent have left you so early,
and in the dust,
the things we said to each other still leave me in disgust,
i hate how it was,
cause i got to be honest i dont cry many tears,
but i would give this up in a second just to be wit you the rest of my years,
and just to be wit you i would without a doubt face all my worst fears,
if i had to jump off the tallest building in the world and fall,
thats what i would do if i could turn back the clock on the wall


thats a mature shit right there and i wrote that cause i knew i wasnt the only person that felt that way so holla back.........

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Originally Posted by Indeph Lyricalsolja you illy on the sickness tip.

YO, THIS IS PRETTY TIGHT HOMMIE. DONT BE GIVIN UP THAT RAP FOR ANY1 THOUGH.................................

theres always times where everyone wishes they could go back in time and change things that happened or say something they didnt. You had good ideas of how you wanted to show this, i just think you could have put them into better words. We all got your message and feelings real clear thou. your basics could be worked on some too. but the main part was the feeling of the piece, and that was pretty good, keep posting!

~Tera~
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