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J Goodz 0 0%
Harlem's Finest 5 100.00%
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Old 12-28-03, 03:26 PM   #1
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J Goodz vs Harlem's Finest

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10 Lines..
Blind Spits..
Due 30 mins from check in...
Good Luck..

*Checking In...*
 
Old 12-28-03, 03:47 PM   #2
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Whoever you jam dog you sweet as them - I got a group called teks Dont make me feature them-
If you get a peice of them- you wont see the end - Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan-
And your flow fucka just part of my extraz- I know Im nice Faggit- I'll say parden and Wet cha-
Fuck a lot of Ho's- Even ones that resemble carmen electra- But your Ho give enough mouth to give a Army a lecture-
If this was a championship game- I would get them damn rings-And if you damn scream- Ima give you damn wings-Fucka holla back for more

 
Old 12-28-03, 04:01 PM   #3
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Damn I'll come back for more...
I got a 4-5 so there aint no nine to hold busta- 9 to 5 straight worker see ima bold hustla-
cows'll fly the day i unload sucka- plus your lepercon flows cant touch my pot of gold fucka-
and HEY!
I get mad brains with a mad Dame- My flow spetacular at times its Dazzling-
And i get mad love from theses mad fiends- These mad rocks get me mad change and mad glocks-
and The man rocks, mad glocks no way to contain me and I bust Mad shots Like my gun was angry-You wont beat me fucka-
I kill'em all
 
Old 12-28-03, 04:01 PM   #4
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I feel quite bad battlin you son, you'll gain a loss before 5 posts
I sense you've got no lyrical ability - I'm battlin WoodJohn's ghost!
Ya shootin blanks as usual... apparantly not only verbal slugs
I hope you'll never try audios either, peeps'll definately don plugs
It's obvious you'll remain un-noticed... obviously won't make it big
I guess theres summut to help tho... maybe find a standout sig
Set a time limit.. you take 10 for that weak response to the thread
Tho credit where its due... obviously you didn't pre-write instead!
Still, you're hardly 'Notorious', I mean just look at ya battle tally
I'm merkin' you kid, sonned straight back....back...to Cali...
 
Old 12-28-03, 04:03 PM   #5
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lol sorry man.....I had a little min or two screen crash...

Uppin for votes..........................................
 
Old 12-28-03, 04:13 PM   #6
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Ima leave you dead fucka with no trace-you a prick that just run to the jakes-
Your blood'll be spilt with a run to the lakes-Ill have you in harlem searching for the lord-
but theres one problem-your not mace
 
Old 12-28-03, 04:20 PM   #7
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Im glad Im battling you on the inernet cause your face shall not be showed-
I usally battle for green but today a price wont be owed-unless i put you on my hype list-
10 dollars for a handgun Ima snypist- 100 dollars just to leave you lifeless- but killing you with hallow point bullets its priceless-
chea!
 
Old 12-28-03, 04:25 PM   #8
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Lmao.....riiiiiggght....use any verse I guess.....

Uppin............................................. .....................................
 
Old 12-28-03, 05:03 PM   #9
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Old 12-28-03, 05:05 PM   #10
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heh...forgot i cant vote...and ignore that, this computer is fucked up...



100 charrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrracters
 
Old 12-28-03, 05:06 PM   #11
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J Goodz
Visit the cypher department..
Overall Weak

Harlem's Finest
Ok verse..clean, good structure..
Pretty nice lines through out..consistant.
The Woodjohn line was funny..
Already won it for you..to one sided..
Some ok solid punches..
Overall Ok-Good.

Return the favour..
 
Old 12-28-03, 05:20 PM   #12
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i'll break it down like i'm supposed to.......

Whoever you jam dog you sweet as them - I got a group called teks Dont make me feature them-

^not a punch not a personal....weak sexual stuff and thinkin your the shit....not battle tactics...

If you get a peice of them- you wont see the end - Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan

^ok you tryed some wordplay i respect that.....flatter with a dagger?....again no punch...more talkin about how good you r..

And your flow fucka just part of my extraz- I know Im nice Faggit- I'll say parden and Wet cha-
Fuck a lot of Ho's- Even ones that resemble carmen electra- But your Ho give enough mouth to give a Army a lecture-

^ok thats almost a punch...no personals...talkin about your girls???....talkin about his girl.....weak.......

If this was a championship game- I would get them damn rings-And if you damn scream- Ima give you damn wings-Fucka holla back for more

^simplistic flow....no punches talkin about how good you are....
filler...you wrote more than 10 thats all i'm going through....

3/10
FINEST...
I feel quite bad battlin you son, you'll gain a loss before 5 posts
I sense you've got no lyrical ability - I'm battlin WoodJohn's ghost!

^good setup the punch was kinda weak is he woodjohn if so ...then the punch hit harder but he prolly don't even know who woodjohn is..

Ya shootin blanks as usual... apparantly not only verbal slugs
I hope you'll never try audios either, peeps'll definately don plugs

^creative OK punch which is enough to take this battle on the punches category......

It's obvious you'll remain un-noticed... obviously won't make it big
I guess theres summut to help tho... maybe find a standout sig
^ kinda weak sorry i ain't feelin that as much as you may have been...

Set a time limit.. you take 10 for that weak response to the thread
Tho credit where its due... obviously you didn't pre-write instead!
^ok you prolly don't wanna give him credit in a battle at all....you coulda punched em but you complimented him......

Still, you're hardly 'Notorious', I mean just look at ya battle tally
I'm merkin' you kid, sonned straight back....back...to Cali...
^goin for a personals here i feel that the punch missed a lil but hey what are yougonna do......
6/10
vote goes to harlem.....
 
Old 12-28-03, 06:22 PM   #13
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Old 12-29-03, 02:28 AM   #14
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Plus I flatter with a Dagger Like Im Peter Pan

-J Goodz that was ok word play i give that like a 5/10

-Harlem finest-It was hard to unserstand your verse man
ther was some nice punches though, But still My vote goes to J goodz.
 
Old 12-29-03, 02:34 AM   #15
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Tha Breakdown
Opener-Harlem
Closer-Harlem
Flow-Harlem
Structure-Harlem
Punches-Harlem

Vote-Harlem
I took tha time now u redo tha favor

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
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