http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9379#post989379
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9385#post989385
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9387#post989387



<hook>
When I get like this I just dont acknowedge the world,
So I end up writing everybody off, even my baby girl...
I sit down to write it out and my rage flows through my pen,
I begin my journey from reality and write off everybody again,

yo,
No matter what goes wrong I still sit quiet and withdrawn,
I mentally write off all who try to respond, even my spawn,
I dont acknowledge my family, my friends, & much less myself,
I get this hate mentality and begin thinkin yo, fuck the world,
Every night I sit and I write, despite the fact that Its all my fault,
So I rewrite and recite this song till I get mad and fight wit da walls,
Then I dive in my own mind, cause its like my only escape from life,
Till I get lost in my mind and end up takin my life with this knife,
Cuz all this hype n confusion, hate n rage only manipulates my fate,
Til Im off to my own zone where it aint cool to have a known face,

<hook>
When I get like this I just dont acknowedge the world,
So I end up writing everybody off, even my own lil girl...
I sit down to write it out till my rage flows through my pen,
I begin my journey from reality and write off everybody again,

A cancerous mentality beyond these clinical studies got me wondering,
How am I to make something outta this nothing that I've got so abundantly,
Another mischeivious attitude is relatin to this decieteful behavior,
Fed up wit the world so Im on my knees prayin to Jesus my savior,
God, please relinquish this stress moldin these knots in my back,
I've had enough of this world, I cant stomach it, like an acid attack,
All my life I've never been able to deal with these problems I got,
From being broke n made fun of, or not being the greenest pea in the pot,
But I got a knee in my back and it seems its my only motivation,
Just the fact that its felt is enough to keep me from a prohibation violation,
what???

<hook>
When I get like this I just dont acknowedge the world,
So I end up writing everybody off, even my baby girl...
I sit down to write it out and my rage flows through my pen,
I begin my journey from reality and write off everybody again,





(lmao... this aint up to my standards... I just had to keep active
wit my open mics... sorry I made yall read this... lol)

yeah liked this man.....structure was good and the flow....vocab was nice,,,and ya multis seemed to get off nicely, i liked the concept behinfd this and thought you executed it in a good way.....on the whole feelin it .......pZ........

thankz for da feed,
uppin

NICE DROP TWIN YOU CAME VERY HUNGRY AND I LIKE THAT

thanx yo...
uppin