10 lines
we know the rules

blah post sometime soon...a day...whatever I could care less

checking in now............................................... .................................................. .................................................. .......ehh............post up tonite man.............

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I’m passionate about ass-whoopings…
………………….Let me give this kid some hard-love
Cuz yours is one sig I’m happy to become part-of
There’s classes on technique…this bitch never took a course
Your glad to battle me…so you can say you finally met-a-for-th
Tech likes to bite my lines…so I post ‘em pre-played^^^^^^^
and I’m sorry to tell you….
I know I’m popular……but I won’t be made famous today
Watch me tear this fuck apart until Technician is no more
Make this queer disappear so the sight has nobody to ignore
Roses and candy…tea parties…teddy bears…and napping is fun
^^And yes it’s a fact that’s as hard as Tech will ever come^^^



please meet your own deadline

i just got in......i'll key suttin up................................................ .................................................. .................................................. ...............................

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If spittin' played lines got you rich kid you would make loot
Cuz see battlin' you is like me matchin wits witta grape-fruit
Whats wrong you look nervous your verse has a shake to it
The structures so flimsy my pinky fingers can break through it
My attacks come hard, lyrically a dentist man I cap them bars
You come to Tech for help on your punches like I map the stars
You desperate for lines dawg them things are on life support
You practice twistin other people disses around like it's a sport
Your worse tha this newb that I battle earlier named Lil Phresh
A week from now theres knuckle prints in ya face still impressed

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UnEmceeAble

I'm passionate about ass-whoopings…
………………….Let me give this kid some hard-love
Cuz yours is one sig I’m happy to become part-of

OK...You want to lose?

There’s classes on technique…this bitch never took a course
Your glad to battle me…so you can say you finally met-a-for-th

Weak.....


Tech likes to bite my lines…so I post ‘em pre-played^^^^^^^
and I’m sorry to tell you….
I know I’m popular……but I won’t be made famous today

UM... if you keep doin wack shit you will be


Watch me tear this fuck apart until Technician is no more
Make this queer disappear so the sight has nobody to ignore

Hmm....Weak once again


Roses and candy…tea parties…teddy bears…and napping is fun
^^And yes it’s a fact that’s as hard as Tech will ever come^^^

Booo.......
Your verse lacked everything
Structure was horrible
Flow was off, Punches were weak

Overall i'd give you 5/20





-Technician-

If spittin' played lines got you rich kid you would make loot
Cuz see battlin' you is like me matchin wits witta grape-fruit

Weak...not hard punch

Whats wrong you look nervous your verse has a shake to it
The structures so flimsy my pinky fingers can break through it

DOPE...Good punch..Very creative


My attacks come hard, lyrically a dentist man I cap them bars
You come to Tech for help on your punches like I map the stars

Lol...


You desperate for lines dawg them things are on life support
You practice twistin other people disses around like it's a sport

Ok Punch...Needs work


Your worse tha this newb that I battle earlier named Lil Phresh
A week from now theres knuckle prints in ya face still impressed

Dope Finisher..Good Punch
Structure was good
Need work on punches
Creativity was good

Overall i'd give you 15/20


-Technician- Simply came harder with punches
Structure was way better
UnEmceeAble... Ya need to elevate Bad
I dont see how you are 13-1

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hahaha... I can't believe I wrote that verse....we need to do a rematch already, I was high as fuck

and to lunatic: your a fucking idiot.... his sig lists the people he lost too........so if I was part of it, I would have won... good work breaking down the battle like fool though

My Bad....
I didn't look at his sig....
I guess i gotta give it to you for that line
But i still think Technician got this
No offense

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open: close but tech
close: tech
personals: close but techs were harder
metas: tech
punches: tech
multis: neither

win: xxxx

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you gotta type like a sentence form dawg...........those breakdown jawns dont count.........................uppin............... ......................

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hey Tech you should put your sig back to how it was....

at least until this battle is over, otherwise your gay

i was gonna leave it..............but so everyone knows when we started this battle i put who i lost to in my sig...........
good enuff fag?
peace
UppN

but you could also been becoming a part of my ko's...........

so u got urself a little there.........

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/\put ure sig back the way it was that is gay


anyway this wasn't that good of a battle for elevated
though i thouth Tech won with hader punches
i have seen both come better than this easily
so my advice is rematch and both come dope
fucka rhyme scheme kill each other with personals

vote Tech

peace