![]() |
|
![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
No Limitz 2 Injustice
IP: C1DA C961
Now..
2 understand dis life first ask da crippled masses they'll tell ya crack only burns 2 turn many into ashes I grieve strongly 4 those bein blasted past away maybe 2 a betta place, found peace atlast & relaxin only if God grants 4giveness 4 der past actions whatever happened 2 da innoscents of a child a milded minded infint blistered wit truth, turns 2 genicile i feel blind, can only wonder why black males ride on der own kind it must b rooted in der past times, der it lies & hides dormant the crime divides & corners der own children da hopless unspoken feelin of bein 4-saken & un4-given it might seem sin is da only form of livin an whose 2 say de wrong i only hear whites complain'in, until we change it it'll continue on stay calm until da flags wrap round ya white spawn an 1 of ur own lay dead & bloody on ur front lawn so young! never thought of burrien ur own son how does it fell momz der is no prejeduce of color in da war zones circumfrance does God even notice, willl there ever b justice ? |
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||||
Guest
|
IP: B910 8CBB
nice shit 7/10
|
||||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
![]() |
||||
Word.
|
IP: 340D 8B8F
^ Make a better reply next time..
But you need to leave 3 links or 3 names of feedback or this will get closed....i noticed that you never leave links/names of replies so..start. But this was ok....structure was ok...but it needs some work though i think....try keeping your lines around the same length to make it structured good....and to help the flow out....try adding some multies as well...but keep at it. |
||||
![]() ![]() |
![]() ![]() |
![]() |
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|