15 mins to spit no crew votes no Hate votes


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best of luck.............................................. ....

let me go against you and test my new skillz















































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what tha fucks this bitch with out his crew/
he aint shit..they bend this bitch over and do what they gotta do/
leave it at that bitch ill beat D.O.I Black and blue/
whip out my dick and pimp slap you/
dont even reply to this im endin your life/
oh i forgot ur 21 with out a life/
you sit on the internet freestyin with teenagers/
fuckin with me u dont know the dangers/
ill end the defition of wackness/
u got just as much illness as i do blackness/
all u will get is a foot in the ass/
if u step to me ill pull and blast/
i have taken out plenty of wack bitches like you/
left em where they dont know who is who/
when im finshed your mama who even know its you/
jus to think her own son a fagget/
compared to me ur jus a magget/
u will never fuckin hackett/
i pull out my machett u had it/
chop ur head and put it on my wall/
im thru bitch thats all/

alright...here it is wyte...a bullshit 4 in the morning verse......

Wyte's the type of person to mispell his own name
fuckin lame, battlin an assassin with absolutely no aim
because my context connects like two trains in a wreck
your losin to t-rex so you decide to battle me next
smart move, you lose, no matter what words you choose
actin all high and mighty but now it's time to pay your dues
your an accurate representation of what a newbie should be
no matter how much you battle, you'll still be new to rb
i'm so far above you that i'm always lookin out for birds
lookin down upon you while your dodgin my words
your verse is like a sedative, repetitive but soothing
and i responded blindly to this, but it's safe to say your losing

damn...i'm fuckin tired outta my mind right now....and if you don't understand the punches and shit don't vote.......only people who have 100 posts or more

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hey ace quit freeposting before you get banned.........there is a forum for that it's called bitch slapped, which i should do to you......

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lol thats a good diverse

















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ok maybe the fact that its 4 in da morin is makein me laght anything

Heres a quick OPION... Diverse took this half asleep, obviously.
I dont even like this fucker... better pnches, better flow, he came a lil' harder than ya man, nuthin' else 2 say.

ite diverse got this in most shit,

flow,
punches(need to hit harder),
personals(need more),
wordplay.

wyte man battle sum pll of ur standerd untill you elavate more man and work on your structure.

hit this with an honest vote as i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98490 ...thx...........pz

uppin to get this battle voted on and over with.............................................. ........

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diverse, gotta tell ya that was a beautiful rap, like the t-rex part, vote diverse........................................... .................................................. ..........

Breakdown----
Punches-D
Flow-D
Structure-D
Metas-D
Sustainment-D
Overall-D

Diverse jus ad better all round..
not bad punches either pz

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98704

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uppin #2 so i can get this battle outta the way.......................and start another one............

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make sure ya hit up the link wot i left...my battle is gettin mad slept on pz
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im goin with diverse overall better
batter flow wordplay and punchlines

Please return the favor and vote for my battle