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No-Crew. Hate. d/r votes
No-feddin

you spit 1st.
verse due 40min after check in.

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PZ

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checked in................................................ .................................................. ............. i'll drop in a couple

dogg, you start shit on the intahnet, cause in real life ya phoney,
y0u start " beef " cause your jus full of " balogne ",
y0u d0nt kn0w me, but will probably come at me with false accusations,
the time your waistin, i'm "siccer " then an aids patient,
n0 matter what happenz im alwayz g0nna be numbah 0ne,
y0u shouldn't even battle, jus make like forest gump and run
run forest run, run forest run, retreat!,
you stepped into this ball game but you can't take the heat,
in my heart i kn0w, i never evah get beat, 2 u this battle is un-pleasent
only g00d muthahfuckin " rapping " you do is on christmas presents,
y0u never bet me but yet you bet me you could serve me, y0u'z a perpatraitor,
y0u coulndn't fuckin " serve me " if y0u waz my waiter,
i'm becomin even greater, y0ur just gettin badder,
hearin mah rhymez and pissin ya pants like u g0tz a problem witcha bladder
this chitter chatter on the net needz 2 stop, its ridiculous,
this guy turned gay after this battle 0uta n0whwere,
n0stradomous couln't have predicted this

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i'm becomin even greater, y0ur just gettin badder,

its supposed to be "i'm becomin even greater, n just gettin badder"
i'll try n get a mod to change it

damnnn man, drop something!!!!!!!!!!!!!>.................................................. .................. lets get dis ovah wit

sorry dawg i was picking up my paycheck...well anyways heres my verse............................................. .................................................. ..

its funny the way you say "you start shit on the intahnet" you cant even spell "Internet".your verse makes absolutly no sence
cause your actually dissin yourself too..NOOB


Explict applyin pressure,
You bout to get out classed well beyond measure,
To infest you with pain, thats my pleasure,
I drop 2nd cause this performance is impossible to follow,
Swallow back,
Matter a fact,
Heres a gat,
Nigga swallow that,
Leave ya ass with a hollow back,
When you get hit with government issue,
Official pistols,
Exposing ya brain tissue
When they kiss you,
Leaving more then a hickey,
The situations bout to get bloody way beyond sticky,
You bout to leave your draws all shitty,
Explict so focused,
I eat threw JaYDeE like a swarm of African locus,
Run but you can't hide, the long arm of the 3-8th a reach ya,
Disfigure ya facial feature,
If aggravated Explict transform's into a creature,
Then you can get a glance of a beast that beat ya,
When I feast on ya flesh,
Turn your whole family a mess,
Theres no escape, just ain't safe,
Explict opening ya face,
Like an unlocked safe,

I gotta go with JayDee cause his punches were harder and his vocab was better Ex you used you own name too much for spittin second you should have focused more on dissin him then tellin us about yourself
vote JD

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this goes no jaydee wit outa adoubt. he came way hareder!

rtn fav! PLZ hit this up with honest vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(its like a week or more old)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92962

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HOLSTER

lol hahah i think that a noob d/r... cause if you actually read jaydee's verse he talks about the internet and how im "supposably" "scared" to rap in person.. when he's actually dissin him self along with every one else in the site.. ..

that was a wack and unfair vote and u know it...


PZ

god dammit.. fucking newbs u dont even read the verses u just post.. wtf///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////

iight check it nigga u iz a discgrace to CHICAGO first of all wuts up with ya structure? ever three woords becomes a new line...yea and u talk about yaself much more than u try dissin JaydeE

As Fore JaydeE u had very good wordplay,punches,and structure
overall i thought ur verse was an 8/10

OVERALL: JaydeE