16 lines
no hate
crew
d/r
any of that whackness

get it done asap

ill vote on this whenboth you emcees spit but in the meantyme can you guys put vote son the battle in my sig yo thanks......................... Peac3....

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SyaNidal \v/ Diverse

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Ur bound to Expload, Just watch as i Bomb your avy,
Just another smoked herb.. That doesn't satisfy my cravings,
I really do...Pitty this fool, Consider me Mr. T...
Cuz I wreck meters down the middle...like c-o-l-l-e-c-t,
Wow your somethin special, U learned to bite rhymes,
If you were Worth something...then i'd be droppin Dimes,
I'll mount this kill on my wall, Another headless Bum,
I'd put you on a plaque...But you are a No one,
I just school you kid...Yet, You don't have any Class,
Ur fucked bitch...Like my las peice of Ass
Ur a true playboy...Servin my Beef on Roller Blades...
But even wit 8 wheels...Meters isn't safe
Meter's next move is goin to be Control Alt Delete,
Cuz i sent him upstairs...Hiding under his sheets

ya that's right... u had 2 leave...
whenever u saw my verse posted or somethin?
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Ready to thrust a knife through ya chest, until it's compressed/
Carve ya up and digest all of ya bars until i get a cardiac arrest/

I'm kinda lika a tumar on ya chest, 'cuz ya really should be aware of me/
and also because i embarass ya skin so crimson bitches think you're a cherokee/

My rhymes focus to unleash the plague of locusts on Soft Focus/
Ya rhymes are as intelligent as first born, so I strike 'em down like Moses/

Can't resist the urge to physically make you a man of few words/
In other words, i'm gonna bury the hatchet and leave our problems minced in thirds/

You can't come hard in the battle, but even worse is in ya sex life you can't cum at all/
'cuz ya structure is as flimsy as ya soft cock but unlike ya streched lines it's a little more small/

My rhymes dice ya creating gills, cast my line into the ocean and snagged ya skills/
Realize that the 'depth might be more defining than me,' but does the depth write wills?/

Thrust bitch,i wish you would have heard that to battle Meters is to know a veil/ (no avail)
Punched ya lighs out so many times had to confirm ya of your loss in braille/

Your punches are dumber than a box of rocks, like a Talaban ya throwin' 'em at me/
Elevate my friend, start throwing twigs, atleast than your rhymes will be snappy/

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Upping for some votes...
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Thrust:

Ur bound to Expload, Just watch as i Bomb your avy,
Just another smoked herb.. That doesn't satisfy my cravings,
^ok personal

I really do...Pitty this fool, Consider me Mr. T...
Cuz I wreck meters down the middle...like c-o-l-l-e-c-t,
^coulda tied this in better, but ok punch

Wow your somethin special, U learned to bite rhymes,
If you were Worth something...then i'd be droppin Dimes,
^good snap

I'll mount this kill on my wall, Another headless Bum,
I'd put you on a plaque...But you are a No one,
^ehh, could've done more with this one

I just school you kid...Yet, You don't have any Class,
Ur fucked bitch...Like my las peice of Ass
^lmao, nice

Ur a true playboy...Servin my Beef on Roller Blades...
But even wit 8 wheels...Meters isn't safe
^-wtf? Maybe it's me, but I didn't see the damn point here...

Meter's next move is goin to be Control Alt Delete,
Cuz i sent him upstairs...Hiding under his sheets
^alright close, could've been a lot more creative at the end.

Meters:

Ready to thrust a knife through ya chest, until it's compressed/
Carve ya up and digest all of ya bars until i get a cardiac arrest/
^Nice multi's, but -until YOU get a cardiac arrest? hmm...

I'm kinda lika a tumar on ya chest, 'cuz ya really should be aware of me/
and also because i embarass ya skin so crimson bitches think you're a cherokee/
^uhh, first line was ok, second tho...no comment...

My rhymes focus to unleash the plague of locusts on Soft Focus/
Ya rhymes are as intelligent as first born, so I strike 'em down like Moses/
^again, nice multi's, like tha "Soft Focus" -good personal

Can't resist the urge to physically make you a man of few words/
In other words, i'm gonna bury the hatchet and leave our problems minced in thirds/
^2nd hardest line of tha battle

You can't come hard in the battle, but even worse is in ya sex life you can't cum at all/
'cuz ya structure is as flimsy as ya soft cock but unlike ya streched lines it's a little more small/
^lol, a lil' played wit' tha "cum" punch, but still funny.

My rhymes dice ya creating gills, cast my line into the ocean and snagged ya skills/
Realize that the 'depth might be more defining than me,' but does the depth write wills?/
^no

Thrust bitch,i wish you would have heard that to battle Meters is to know a veil/ (no avail)
Punched ya lighs out so many times had to confirm ya of your loss in braille/
^LMAAOOO HAHAHA, NICE PUNCH!-ya best line.

Your punches are dumber than a box of rocks, like a Talaban ya throwin' 'em at me/
Elevate my friend, start throwing twigs, atleast than your rhymes will be snappy/
^ehh close, not REALLY a stab to close it.

ok battle:

Opener: Met
Close: Thr
Multi's: Met
Punches: Met
Personals: Met

Vote: Meters

Hate when mutha fuckas SLEEP on shit? Me too - BE REAL, & RETURN THA FAVOR WIT some honest votez.

Links?

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95464

vote - Meters

just iller, not a great fan of his structure, but im not really a fan off the all capped verse either. he had better wordplay and punchlines which gets meter his vote. return the fav

vote honestly
Cannabarz vs MC Profit (3-0)

Cannabarz vs Looney Boi (3-0)

mine goes to Meter too, even thought i can't vote!!:P
meters had a really nice verse as spekta said so... for me he won...

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

i think meters had better flow, structure, punches n personals plus his opner i loved the 'strike em down like moses' Line lmao anyway My VOte=Meters
both yall drop a honest vote on the battle in my sig....

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SyaNidal \v/ Diverse

....Tragic..Death..I....

....Tragic..Death..II....

o yeah ill poll that vote as soon as i hit 100 posts which should be sometime tonite PEAC3!.....................

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SyaNidal \v/ Diverse

....Tragic..Death..I....

....Tragic..Death..II....

my vote is metters hey meters up my vote also down at this one the battle is being slept on dog meters didnt evne have to try to win this he alrady won by just saying YO

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