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Old 12-16-03, 04:49 PM   #1
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Aisle 5 Diss-Will he Ever Come Back??

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Well??? Will He

Aisle 5 dissed me by sayin I wasnt good enuf for the Tag'd
I dint say I was...but the fact is..you got a bad Attitude
we just wanna put our thoughts onto paper...
Peasantries first Diss...ahhh i can smell it!!!

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Aisle 5, This kid can't spit flames so votes for himself
Fake pussy...Enterin RB.Com Wit usernames on stealth
Underneath ya belt..Ain't holdin nuttin..This kids a fake
Y vote for ya self?...Is that what ya self confidence takes?
To rise up, You've had enough..Burned N threw out, Tragedy
Sayin Aisle was an Ill MC?...That's a parady on top of comedy
Fuck this...Ain't no usual diss...5 I'm really sorry Blud,It's real
The hate I feel in my stomach..My wound jus will not seal
Til your through..End of ya existance...Aisle 5 meets his demise
Ha ha,Retalliate?? How??Can't rejoin,no matter how he tries!!
MC 81??? Tu Cents???...To me this guy's Non~Cents
Get it??Ya nonsense... So fuck ya self confidence

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excuse me..where is the Crooked section?? "its over on Aisle 5"
were pushed to the edge of the board N still wunt take a Dive
protesting your Innocence..but the Mods see you're Transparent
I only jus thought ya were a Prick..but now its clearly Apparant
Gio\/ani...damn!!! creating threads to get fuckin Noticed...
..N am sure you'll retaliate w/ a weak diss..jus another Alias
if your Rb career was a Stop Watch..you'd be stuck in Time..
..you say you're a good Mc..but peeps would rather see ya Mime
still protesting you're a Vet..coz ya cut for the Lyricist League..
..but you jus lost ya Breath..like an Obese man With Fatigue
I aint in to dissin Random peeps..but your attitude Stinks..
RB was a Faulty Chain so they jus dispersing of weak Links

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3293#post993293
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3323#post993323
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3334#post993334
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Old 12-16-03, 04:56 PM   #2
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^ NICE..

Wish I could hve been in this though..
I have beef with Aisle 5.. So Next time include me..

Anyways.. Could have had better metas but overall not bad... Vocab was ok..
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Old 12-16-03, 05:11 PM   #3
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yea i was feeling this piece
especially this line
"I aint in to dissin Random peeps..but your attitude Stinks..
RB was a Faulty Chain so they jus dispersing of weak Links"
lol that shit was hot, good flow through out the whole thing
nice vocab, all around good piece
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Old 12-16-03, 05:41 PM   #4
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It was a little...eh.
I see some lines were dope...especially B.I's closing line. Everything else was either played or whack. sorry, but I wasn't feelin it.
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Old 12-16-03, 05:56 PM   #5
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becoz u were one of his many friends
nuttin played about it...so fuck it..
and fuck you..blah!!!
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Old 12-16-03, 06:01 PM   #6
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This was wack.
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Originally posted by B.I.Detained
becoz u were one of his many friends
nuttin played about it...so fuck it..
and fuck you..blah!!!


Indeed, except a diss back. You and Token.

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Old 12-16-03, 06:05 PM   #8
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lmao...nice username and stop freeposting..
hmmm..did they want to IP you???..
I'll check..
oh yea Ped said dont 4get him!!!...lmao
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Old 12-16-03, 09:36 PM   #9
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Old 12-16-03, 09:40 PM   #10
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needs work but far from weak all and all its a good strike but only a first strike nect one will have to come harder....never the less a good read stay up twin
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Old 12-16-03, 10:01 PM   #11
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Yea This was alltight But it was a Pretty Weak Diss But Ya Both Had Nice Verse And Ya Both Did Well In the End...Ya Structure was Good And Ya Flow was Good Also....Yea This was An Allright Diss And aslo Why does every One Hate Aisle 5 So I will say this to Make Every One Feel Betta he is a Fucken Weak Cheater If he Got Court LoL....P.€.a.c.€..........
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Old 12-18-03, 04:33 PM   #12
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uppin on behalf of...well...meself n B.I......FUK BALLISTIC KID.....
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