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G'luck

Sorry it just a quick keystyle i got to go to work tommorow
G'luck dune

Yo this dudes bout ta get burned like it's World War 2
You'l be incarcerated, incinerated when I gas you dude
Dun think I'm a Nazi, cause I aint even white bitch
Hearin you rap makes me wish Hitler just finished it
I'll murder ya rhymes like you in front of a firing squad
Bring back memories? Thats why ya grandparents are wit God
I'm just like a K-Mart employee cause I "spit on Target" bitch
'Cause your punches have mo misses than a lesbian flick
You turn ya back on me yo cause you can't front wit me foo
Like Clint Eastwood Do you feel lucky punk? Well jew you?


no hate, jus a battle, lets see some votes

vote-tactical.. jewish you had a decent flow, but sometimes u would go off on some totally different tip, like the first 2 bars.. didnt even rhyme.. then u rhymed the next 3 unevenly.. and your finisher didnt rhyme either, half the verse was about dicks n clits.. u need to think more about lyrical punches aim'd at your opponent.. some personals too.. try complexing your scheme a little bit.. tactical didnt come great either but he had a better foundation.. his shit rhymed evenly and had some personals seasoned with the occasional punch, closer made me laugh, so stick with it but tac got this.. vote on my shit when theunderated posts

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This was a good battle but
I think both of ya'll was a
bunch of shit, Nobody should
have won this battle because
ya'll was on that bull shit.
I think that Center sight was
a Dick riding vote. Because they
both was garbage

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uppin the ;last time, dun let this sleep! .................................................. ...............

both verses coulda been betta, but tactical came harda than djo did...good try though...u need to work on ur rhymes djo..


vote-tactical

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Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

this battle was weak, but tactical took it, jew your structure was cool but you barely rhymed anything good with any hard punches. disses were off...tactical didn't come much better, but he had better disses....vote=tactical

peep my battle with meters and return and honest vote.
peace

_ÑÒÀßÙSÈ_ this crazy fool is always saying elevate

but his record is 3-12 FUCKING FUNNY WHAT A TOOL

honestly this battle wasn't that great but.... i think tactical took a shit on da jewish one, dog you suck dick, i mean real fat balls, i coudln't even tell if you was fucken rhyming, no but in aint even trying to hate on you dog just get better. yeah my record suck but i'm underated, so bitch if you mad and you want to battle me set it up, you suck dog

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