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tech knows he wack.. came to kick my ass and brought a lunch
so i set up a picnic.. ate tha herb.. and ended it with one punch
..kids got a kaosphobia.. tryed to spit.. but he can't handle fear
i started ripping.. tach got scared.. and jumped to tha chandlelear
imprint ya ass in tha assfault.. leave your flesh embeded in pavement
BS? save it.. could incircle crap with enigmas and still not amaze shit
he's at tha highest point of his elevation.. right now tha devils above him
coming elevated higher than everest to pound you through tha summit
hard? technician's soft.. emcees eat his ryhmes like gerber babys food
but my flow..will leave this pussy more exposed than.. ladies nude

tech knows he wack.. came to kick my ass and brought a lunch
so i set up a picnic.. ate tha herb.. and ended it with one punch

Blah .. that an Ok Starter .. should have came harder dawg 3/10

..kids got a kaosphobia.. tryed to spit.. but he can't handle fear
i started ripping.. tach got scared.. and jumped to tha chandlelear

Not Very Good ... 4/10

imprint ya ass in tha assfault.. leave your flesh embeded in pavement
BS? save it.. could incircle crap with enigmas and still not amaze shit

. . . . 4/10

he's at tha highest point of his elevation.. right now tha devils above him
coming elevated higher than everest to pound you through tha summit

above him .. summit .. no ryhme there partner 2/10

hard? technician's soft.. emcees eat his ryhmes like gerber babys food
but my flow..will leave this pussy more exposed than.. ladies nude

This Was A Good Line .. i Have To Admit ... 8/10

No Hate dawg ... Basicaly u need to hit harder with punches ... u got good structure .. and good ideas .. but u need to take that extra step and get creative

Overall - 5/10


...... Waiting On Technicans Verse

Peace

Shit.....Straight up....

You'll never elevate past me but you might stop near me.....
You should be callin' me Socratees the way I drop Theory
This fag Reppin' Central without one good battle crudential
To Insure you is essential, punches rock you like Prudential
Your hoping your verse can be filled and just display no holes
But when you go skiing is the only time your ever gettin polls
Flow is off just a little bit, Tech eat you like Peanut brittle bitch
Ur verse I fiddle width, stretch ur face like ur lines an dribble sipts
Ya structure is fucked it looks like it's about to be brakin' slightly
Maybe you'll win Michael Jackson bitch ass won't be taken lightly

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^ win WHEN ..........................taken lightly ( his skin complexion)

had to fix that.........couldnt edit

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This battle is prolly the illest in frontlines so far, but -Technician- gets this win for the better flow of his verse and the better structure, the rest like punchlines and wordplay...they were both met to be very strong..alongside vocab, in which Kaos dominated alongside creativity, Tech dominated some-what personals, which cancels out technician 3, against Kaos 2.

vote - -Tech-

vote on this battle in return, the both of you.

Cannabarz vs Freakyjay [Banishment Battle]

alright kool check it.............

tech knows he wack.. came to kick my ass and brought a lunch
so i set up a picnic.. ate tha herb.. and ended it with one punch
..kids got a kaosphobia.. tryed to spit.. but he can't handle fear
i started ripping.. tach got scared.. and jumped to tha chandlelear
imprint ya ass in tha assfault.. leave your flesh embeded in pavement
BS? save it.. could incircle crap with enigmas and still not amaze shit
he's at tha highest point of his elevation.. right now tha devils above him
coming elevated higher than everest to pound you through tha summit
hard? technician's soft.. emcees eat his ryhmes like gerber babys food
but my flow..will leave this pussy more exposed than.. ladies nude


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Ok no hate here Kaos but y the fuck couldn't you come at me like that.....I would of won then......cry....anyway heres what i saw....a couple memorable lines....not much originiality the wordplay was not as on point as it has been in the past and its just not enough to take tech in this one...........mabye next time just try playin with your verse a bit more....think verbs and work similes off of em it helps....

you'll never elevate past me but you might stop near me.....
You should be callin' me Socratees the way I drop Theory
This fag Reppin' Central without one good battle crudential
To Insure you is essential, punches rock you like Prudential
Your hoping your verse can be filled and just display no holes
But when you go skiing is the only time your ever gettin polls
Flow is off just a little bit, Tech eat you like Peanut brittle bitch
Ur verse I fiddle width, stretch ur face like ur lines an dribble sipts
Ya structure is fucked it looks like it's about to be brakin' slightly
Maybe you'll win Michael Jackson bitch ass won't be taken lightly

yea i was feelin this nice personals..good worplay i liked the similes adn the wordplay within the punches...you really came nice and hard on this one and your hard work paysoff in my opinion ...........i think tech took this no hate either way...

i still LOVE YOU Kaos Theory..... both y'all peep my battle with postman should be good one..........

Canabars .. this Wasnt Sikkest Battle Ever in Front Lines Lol

Heres what I Posted About Theory





Technician -

You'll never elevate past me but you might stop near me.....
You should be callin' me Socratees the way I drop Theory

Fukin Sick - 9/10

This fag Reppin' Central without one good battle crudential
To Insure you is essential, punches rock you like Prudential

Meh .. Good Wordplay - 6/10

Your hoping your verse can be filled and just display no holes
But when you go skiing is the only time your ever gettin polls

Very Creative - 8/10

Flow is off just a little bit, Tech eat you like Peanut brittle bitch
Ur verse I fiddle width, stretch ur face like ur lines an dribble sipts

Blah Blah Blah .. Filler , 5/10

Ya structure is fucked it looks like it's about to be brakin' slightly
Maybe you'll win Michael Jackson bitch ass won't be taken lightly

Jackson Lines Are MADDD Played - 3/10


Overall - 6.5/10

Vote = Tech

good Battle

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mah votez goez 2 tech....herez y
punches: tech
humour: tech
multis: kaos
opener: tech..You'll never elevate past me but you might stop near me.....
You should be callin' me Socratees the way I drop Theory...nice
closer:kaos....dat line wit da baby food shyt waz nice...
vote: thech...hit up mah battle plzeee......ill drop link

nice battle....tech...i prolly should of came harder...oh well....peace

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