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04-13-06, 03:29 PM | #1 | ||||||
New to RV
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Spittin some truth, on some real shit
IP: ECF8 7A04
Feelin like im stranded, As I realize the bad that man did
Call it karma, where we all wear body armor, Fear suddam or osama, why all the drama? It just don’t make sense, when we cant pay the rent Where every cent matters, like im playin snakes n ladders As the innocent blood splatters, seems like till they hear them gun shots Hear them bodies drop, our point dun get got. Spreadin my message, leavin me guessin, askin the wrong questions Feelin like cocking the smith n Wesson, n teachin myself a lesson ---------------------------------------------------- Just the beginning of a track, i noe its not a free, but more people in here to c it, feeed back yall, critisisismn helps yah noe, so do yah thang, lemme noe whatcha think
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noone can stop me, noone can top me, as i have ma finger out the window yellin fuck the law |
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04-15-06, 09:59 PM | #2 | ||||
pain is weakness leaving the body
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IP: F11A E1DA
flow kinda off, or i couldn't really catch it... but then again, freestyles don't have to flow like traditional verses..... i like the topic area, but a little too haphazard for my taste.... like, it was deep, but depth done on purpose is depth without a purpose... anyways, i still was feelin it, but think about what i said... stay up playa, and keep spittin...
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"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..." -Konchance my poetry: untitled |
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