this is my version of why......only most of 1 verse......i think its pretty good but what do i know.....please leave feedback and i will return favors.....

Why?
verse 1
Why i cant be WHITE in HIP HOP/
Why i gotta experience a gangsta LIFE to GET PROPS//
And why i get criticized for the CLOTHES THAT I WEAR/
Why peeps incompitent?, and they are, thats why i aint CHOSEN TO CARE//
Why's it so hard for you to KEEP TO YOURSELF/
And why's there role models?, why in the world would I try to BE SOMEONE ELSE//
Why is there so much HATE IN THE AIR/
Cuz people love to hate so when the day comes they stop the HATIN BE SCARED//
Why the world cant be SUCKAFREE/
Cuz there wouldnt be much of a population here OTHA THAN ME//
Why what i live for is what i would DIE FOR/
Why would there be no purpose in life if i had nothin to STRIVE FOR//
Why i cant figure what im ALIVE FOR/
Why am i one of god's sons?, why was it us that he DIED FOR//

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first off not that hott second it warn out just stop with the shit

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uppin......i said i knew it was played dumbass...im just postin the shit to get some feed....that doesnt say " the why shit is played out" i fuckin know.....just look beside the fact that its a remix of why....and give me some feedback....im tryin to elevate...not get shot down...

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Yo hommie its not that bad at all just keep doing your thing,
atleast you came up with your own questions an didnt bite,
I give you props for that an i give you props for making the effort to elevate
Without having some one tell you to,,people tell me that all the time,
But your not the worst on here so dont feel like you need to elevate all that much,
Just believe you're elevating and it will be made so through God,,
never mind who puts you down or lack the words of encouragement
I'll give you the words of encouragement and the respect as an artist keep writting
And i'll keep responding ,but Keep God first and all things will come
rate 6.9/10 because i know your heart was there before you wrote it,
and i dont have the heart to diss another person when i have my own faults,
we all do,,but some of us think we're better then others,and refuse to acknowledg
reality for once,,,but remember this
The truth can never hurt you unless your refucing to face it,
I have faced it along time ago so here i am a changed man,,,
Thank you Jesus for your wisdom an time you have invested in me
Amen
Good drop hommie i'll keep you in my prayers

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

aright man....thanks alot......uppin for some more feedback

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uppin for feedback

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i liked it.i'm gonna read it a couple more times to really get the feel of it but it was a good piece.

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I'm like CHUCKy dyin' to live in the flesh free of the BATTERY,
ASSAULT n ROBBERY rapidly,wishin' cupid would clap at me
N lift this evil spell so I can experience happilly evil backwards-see(down there)
EVIL............backwards =............LIVE

thanks for the feed....uppin for more

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i won't to text battle somebody lets battle unless you scared biotch!

this thread is to leave feedback on my verse...not to see if i wanna battle you....go somewhere else.......uppin

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uppin for feedback...let me know what yall think

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