Fixed ya link:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/a...kdakidmusic.htm

Track is niiiice man. Your flow is flawless with this track. Beat is nice, and you ride it mad comfortable. Good story, and you know how to put a track together. Some nice multi's in the 2nd verse. Hook is catchy and fluid. Track is overall dope. Good looks. 1

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jea dope shii man, holla at me for dat collab we was talkn about b4
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kidcard7692: cock-a-doodle niggaz
da916_nigga: I hate whites, blacks, and mexicans...but I love my greens
kidcard7692: Niggas dont eat sprinkles
kidcard7692: i just fell going up the stairs

yo this shit is hot man. nice beat, and the verses you put together just made this shit sound better. you know what i mean? flow was directly on point. basically this was a spotless track. couldnt find anything wrong with it. I liked it up a lot. keep droppin hot shit

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classic shit here...................hittin the beat on point............nice hook too, feelin it, might want to change one or two words to make it more memorable..............good story tellin, nas like or even old school rap type story telling slick rickish, nice shit, your hot, gotta give you an A for this, and I don't give a lot of em, peace and hit me if you get the chance

get at me if you get a chance
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=179850

iight listenin...

flow comes on nicely, im feelin the story tellin, lyrics is solid... hook is cool, it reminds me of some underground shit... second verse on point just like the first one... I aint really got anything to point out to improve other than just keep uppin what you already workin with, good shit..1

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i feel this shit.. nice laid back shit.. dont liek the beat at all tho.. flow was good.. second verse i liked more.. iunno.. something about the track i just wasent feeling...


but you was Good witht he flow, lyrics and delivery.. it aint liek you did nuffin wrong.. i just dont think i like it iuno.. i aint hating, cause the shit is dope.. but i iunno.. you kinda see what im saying ?.. ne way.. plz keep droppin hehe.. -1

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chorus is stupid dope, and the begining of the second part, that flow is the best in the song. i didn't really like the begining cuz you didn't seem into as much as the end. i like this beat to this story, and agian this chorus is fuckin dope to this beat. lovely shit here.

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thanks homie...

ok......listening.....the beat is hellsa hard man feelin this,,,,,ya lyrics were cool...i'm feelin this right here man.....real cool track.......8.5/10

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Listening: im feelin the beat and also the lyrics soundin cool, its got a nice flow to it and the hook was good the quality was aight, overall it was a good song

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