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01-21-04, 03:36 PM | #1 | ||||||
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I better introduce myself, Real recognise me!!
IP: 9941 835F
I'm so sick that I could flow in slow motion, And still keep up with the Jones's/
Rip your residential leave ya homeless, Fuck a wheel of steel I got chrome spits/ Call me 'gold wrists'. I'm hearin' 'U God!', This bigger than Miss Electra's next boob job!/ True drops,........ Causing 'Havoc' to drop the 'Prodigy' like I rule Mobbs/ Below-the-belt cruel shots like we be boxing, Fuck a P.Diddy video that you been watching/ Crossing the world with cold toxins, Aint from Harlem but I'm 'Globe Trotting'/ Most emcee's know nothin', I'm schooled in this game cos' I hold knowledge/ Ya style's mouldy like old porridge, To those who aint known ''I'm the most wanted!"/ In my spit's theres nuthin pointless, Drop 2 tracks backwards like im double-'joint'ed/ In battle hold ya voice kids, Cos the result is only gnna leave you dissapointed/ Got 'cuts'?, Come get the ointment, Most speak with police, Got federal appointments/ While we handle our beef with peeps on the streets and get another joint son/ Ya dont want none, I bring actual tragedy, Think im crazy? It's the bastard in me!/ Faster than an Athlon AMD, Fuck your preach, I hold a rap Masters degree/ Check the harm within me, You gone get 'cracked child' like your fathers a fiend/ So much weed it's like I'm harvesting green, Look at my scripts and say, ''Thats the bar of my dreams''/ |
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01-21-04, 03:38 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: C1DA C961
Hmmm...your structures all fucked up~~~other than that...okay...
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01-21-04, 03:40 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 9941 835F
tks for reply, but structure aint fucked , that 32 bars, in 8 bar format
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01-21-04, 03:42 PM | #4 | |||||
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yes it is very fucked up..anyone here will tell you that..get rid of the //.. |
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01-21-04, 03:44 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: 9941 835F
you looking for a battle or sumthing? do u actually know anything about music structure?
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01-21-04, 04:01 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: 4514 2C8C
it's structure for a audio piece but if your droppin' text, it's best to make it readable...apart from that it was dope,,,got some nice lines in there:
"I'm so sick that I could flow in slow motion, And still keep up with the Jones's/ Rip your residential leave ya homeless, Fuck a wheel of steel I got chrome spits/ " - was just one out of several.... Keep spittin', expand your vocab a bit th0....havn't you been here before, i remember a cat called dark some time ago..might have battled him or something. |
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01-21-04, 04:55 PM | #7 | ||||||
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nuff respect RT, nah i aint been here before, i tired to register as dark but the name was took, had to add that @ instead.
ill take your crit into mind and put it to practice, get at me. |
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