aight battle

15 lines
usual rules
I spit 1st

gud luck

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

yo daffer ill batle u lata i gotta go ight peace ill be back in liek a hour

aight I'm gonna spit now............................

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

I'll battle everyone but I'm not too sure of victory
Because theres butt munchers like Lust saying he rocks lyrically
I say I'll beat your face in to an appearance thats sickly
Spit on you with your gals pussy on my tongue bcoz I've been getting up to licky licky
See bitch you don't wanna mess with me
If you wanna stay alive get out of your fuckin country
You don't wanna be popped up with a bullet in your chest
That's why i'm givin you the chance to pull on your faggot bullet-proof vest
Nigga this is my quest to kill every mothafucka that I really detest
I'm not givin in until you rest, so everybody can see I'm the best
Damn nigga, I bet you don't even know how to reply to this
See ya lata bitch,and this is no fuckin diss, you wish
You made a mistake tryin to beat me,
Lust what were you thinkin, think you gonna get this for free?
Boy you need to elevate, but you think that you're already the greatest MC
This battle is over cuz you're just another gaypussy newbie

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

your turn Lust

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

yo i just got back give me liek 25 mins aight

aight

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

ur just another faggot i gotta merk
another bitch who i gotta fuck
with ur prewritten lines ur outta luck
u claim that u spit but really,the only time u spitten is when u spittin out seamen
yeah bitch i do wanna mess wit u
ur a faggot who thinks he ganster and thinks he tight too
when u step to me be prepared for a lyrical beating
u battleing me is like sending food for the lions feeding(me being the lion u being the food)
the way i drop rappers like u i should get litter fines
u dont know who u fuckign with , ur the worst im divine
a crack hoes pussy is tigher then u

lets get sum votes in

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

ok here how it went.

daffer = your flow was good for the most part, and structure was ok, ya had some nice punches and personals and vocab was decent.

lust = i wozent feelin your flow, structure was nowhere and ya had no real punches. go to wackness center now, ya need to elevate.

flow = daf
structure = daf
punches= daf
vocab = daf

vote = daf

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG. THANKS

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daffers punches came weak but his flow was ok
lusts flow was basic too but he used more punches and they were a bit better
if dafferused better vocab he would have one coz his verse was more creative
vote-lust
peep these and leave battle linkls
vs fantazee
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112516

vs Timeless
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...d.php?p=1166316

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upping votesssssss (1)

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Wathup Bitches ready for my spit

Wins: Lust (5-1)
Bettws (5-0)
Rappin' Master (5-1)
Baz187 (5-0)
Young 5 Mic(s) (5-3)
Losses: Timeless (DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)
Bonez1000(DQ for being in 4 battles at a time)

Both very weak verses. You need to make direct punches, or a comparison in two things somebody else hasnt done already. Gay jokes, mom jokes are out. Gun jokes are sorta out. Quit using filler both.

Vote - Daffer

Punches: Neither, both had no real punches
Wordplay: Neither, neither had wordplay
Multis: Neither, both used straight 1 syllable
Personals: Daf, because he used the country line, but don't use that anymore, 50% of the people here are from America, if that's what you meant.
Opener: Neither, both very weak
Closer: Neither, also both pretty weak.

Daff gets this just because he had more material, and a personal, while Lust had absolutely nothing. Both in need of elevation.

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uppin for votes ...................