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01-02-06, 05:48 AM
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Baby Girl Remix
IP: 8988 B640
This is a lil sometin I wrote in a few minutes...so hope you like it...
http://www.soundclick.com/castrous Last edited by Castro : 01-02-06 at 06:00 AM. |
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01-02-06, 05:54 AM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 8988 B640
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01-02-06, 07:12 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 16FF 90B2
Aight....
Beats Nice Your Vocals Are Too Low Flows Good Of What I Can Hear Deliverys Koo Emotions Aight Lyrics Are Koo For What It Is Lol Hmmm I Cant Really Hear That Much Need To Listen Real Hard Hmm Jim Jones Meh... Lol Good Thing Of What I Hear...Jus Upp Your Vocals 3rd Verse Koo Overall:7/10-Upp Your Vocals  Rtf-http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=2603052#post2603052
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01-02-06, 07:19 AM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 8988 B640
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lol cool...so on that note erryone else put ya speaker volume up lol...thnx for the feed. |
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01-02-06, 10:10 AM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 8988 B640
werd........................
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01-02-06, 02:54 PM
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IP: 8988 B640
uppin for some feed..
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01-02-06, 03:15 PM
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The Light
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IP: EFD5 FB85
yea volume way low G
first verse - flow on point most time.. lyrics are strait from what the song is about.. so you strait i aint never been a dipset fan and definately not a camron fan.. but it was aight second verse - strait for the most part.. really hard to hear ya lyrics tho son.. my speakers only go so loud heehee.. id say you just need to work on when writing ya lyrics.. havin a more creative way of sayin somethin or if not even that, make it really fun to listen to you rhyme.. like make people be like "i like the way he put that, even tho that dont really rhyme its tight? you know ? deliver it to em.. just work on that and you'll be on a pretty good start.. ya flow has some crativeness to it so thats a plus.. ok drop tho son..
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01-02-06, 05:57 PM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
why are you whispering on the mic?
ur flow is on beat...but ur delivery is mumbly why are the sound levels so low? the 2nd cat after the hook has a nice flow interesting voice hook...I like the delivery of it...but, there was nothing memorable about it hooks, IMO, should be repetitive, almost chant-like to be catchy 3rd verse...choppy flow...even though it's on beat for the most part decent drop fix ur levels RTF please in my Been a long time track 1 |
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01-02-06, 11:45 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 8988 B640
IT WAS 4 in the MORNIN I didnt want to wake nobody up lol.
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01-02-06, 11:46 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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IP: 8988 B640
BUt thnx for the feed...I'll rtf wen I can...
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