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Old 04-01-03, 09:39 AM   #1
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-Now there shouldn't be no question how I rip kats...Leave nigs dismantled on meat racks...Servin to King Pins as late snacks.
-Spit with a tool to bruise any oncomers...Bout to lose ya hunger when you plunder with this rap legend.
-You've been mistaken to clap steel, My name is etched in...I wish I thought you wanted to blast cause your vest would catch ten.
-Let's see you digest that recipe...Dessert is buck shots from a sawed shot down your throat's entry.
-Now what's left?, Take your chick to ya and show ya death...Your brain left on your doorstep when I removed ya neck.
-I'm so deadly emcees steadily stay as far as they can...I spit venom that'll verbally remove a man.
-Direct with energy to speech for hours...Without a break to think cause I got brain power.
-I'm a raw spittah and if you think not coward...You foolin yaself cause I got proof of being a rap scholar.

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Old 04-01-03, 09:51 AM   #2
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Damn... i like deez bars.. that shit is tight!!
"-Let's see you digest that recipe...Dessert is buck shots from a sawed shot down your throat's entry."
Nice linez.
Check myne and tell me what i can work on
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Old 04-01-03, 09:52 AM   #3
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nice one dawg.. rep that shit..

"You've been mistaken to clap steel, My name is etched in...I wish I thought you wanted to blast cause your vest would catch ten.
-Let's see you digest that recipe...Dessert is buck shots from a sawed shot down your throat's entry.
"....

^nice^..... you could've worded shit a bit better, but I liked it...
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Old 04-02-03, 07:28 AM   #4
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Thanks for the replies.
Uppin this.
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Old 04-02-03, 09:42 AM   #5
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Uppin.
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Old 04-02-03, 10:20 PM   #6
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Up.
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Old 04-03-03, 12:44 AM   #7
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yo nice lil verse...it flowed pretty good and you had some good lyrics. i'd say the only thing you should try to improve is the multis. other than that, its all good
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Old 04-03-03, 06:52 AM   #8
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hah yeah some dope lines in there man, that recipe and desert was was sick, haha, Reppin V.A - Madskillz town haha, OOO YEAH!!!

Peace Out Yo!!!!
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Old 04-03-03, 07:33 AM   #9
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Good lookin out.
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