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05-13-05, 03:07 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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Ghoast Da One N Only!
IP: 2029 97B3
This Is Ma Freestyle Not Ma Part-of-speech
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190471Im On Da Top Of Da Game My records To-hard-ta-reach Freestylin off Da Dome, Half of Them I Cant Reveal Chargez Pendin On Me,Cuz theze-teenz Think Im For-real I Let My Chain Shine,Let My Linez-Glow not -Lookin- 4 Bytchez,But i Still Find -Hoz- Smokin On Da -wood-,N Still Flow-Clean Have Hadaz -Lookin- Dazed out,Similiar Ta (Coke-Feenz) Got Ma Bag Of Weed,Sippin up on Da Whiskey Walk Down Ma Block-Squabbin Hadaz Who Done Diss-me My Flowz -Blow- With No Mercy,Like A Souljaz-Grenadez ~Slicin~ Bustahz Up-With Dey own (Shoulda-Bladez) No Chance To Recover cuz What u Do Is Whatcha Done Come With Extreme Force,Lose Ya Breath n Be Stunned Rookiez Should Stop (Flowin),N -Try- bein N Actress Partyin All Night Leavin All Bottlez Cap-less Dont Complain About My lyriks When i Wreck With Ma Keyz My Lyriks Sick,Have Ya Sneezin ya Lungz out-Like-As If U Had Allergiez Linez Cauzin Eruptionz,Corruptionz,of all typez leave ya Azz Rustier that -Fat-Bastardz- Sewer Pipez (LoL) ~DEUCEZ~
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05-14-05, 04:13 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: ED88 2C9A
YuuuuuuuuuuuuuuUUUUUUUUP!
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05-14-05, 05:18 PM
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Succès Facile!
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IP: 99A1 48F7
alot of multis good wordplay sometimes played punches but overall i enjoyed reading it.
tha line(Freestylin off Da Dome, Half of Them I Cant Reveal Chargez Pendin On Me,Cuz theze-teenz Think Im For-real) got me feelin like you are sum sorta molester.explain that for me! over all it was good structure was easy ta read an made easy tah understand ur flow. 8/10 |
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05-14-05, 05:22 PM
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Peace, Love, Unity
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IP: AB23 98FF
Basically what he said. I don't think its a freestyle though. Probably pre-written. But either way I still like it. Nice multis. Structure was kinda off. Nice from someone with not that many posts. But anyway, return the favor on "Past to Present"
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05-14-05, 07:27 PM
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~*This Worldz A Sin So Why Hate Me For My Habits~*
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IP: 0825 899A
Freestylin off Da Dome, Half of Them I >>Cant<< Reveal
Chargez Pendin On Me,Cuz theze-teenz (>Think<) Im For-real in other words u read the lyriks i spit about alwayz sayin ima ~slice~ or bury a nigga n theze teenz 13-16 take it real serious! n thank for da props i need to work on my flow n shyt but i still got time to do that but thanx anywayz n holla atcha boy ( it was a freestyle ima post a written but im better freestylin but when it comes to battlez then thats when i get real serious but this aint shyt but you'll see) n WTF is up with this >>yuuuuup!? dont be replyin BS like that but holla atcha boy
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05-14-05, 11:16 PM
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IP: B48F 5388
Tahaa nice! U got dat wordplay popin,along wit da punches and vocab homie...
overall i rate this 7/10...opener was good...closer was magnificent...keep it up homie..
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