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06-14-05, 11:53 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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Pen N' Paper vs R-Rated
IP: BCDF 13C0
R-Rated Vs. Pen N Paper .::Rules::. 30 Lines Max 5 Votes Wins 3-0 Is A KO No Crew No Hate No D/R House Rules Topic: Mirror of Illusions ~R~ Minimum posts to vote: 400 Check in by: 06-15-05 at 11:53 AM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. 3-0 KO |
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06-14-05, 12:06 PM
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#2
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IP: 473F 6D42
Pen N' Paper has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 12:06 PM.
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06-14-05, 04:36 PM
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#3
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IP: E3D5 FE0F
R-Rated has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-14-05 04:36 PM.
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06-16-05, 05:10 PM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 473F 6D42
6:00 A.M. on 06/06/06
Waking up and I see a radiance from my bathroom, I close my eyes Wishing, thinking it’s a dream and I reopen its still there where it lies I grab my gun from under my bed and just in case to save my life I enter and the light disappears but then in the counter I see a knife Look inside the bathtub and nothings there so I go back to sleep Get into bed and fall away but to make sure my gun I will keep 9:00 A.M. on 06/06/06 Hear a loud sound and my gun vanished so I go back to the room Inside its gloom, turn on the lights thinking my gun there I assume Then I see something in the mirror and I don’t see my reflection The views in my mind I’m not believing in my own perception I get scared, I close my eyes and reopen them again and I see myself The reflection has my gun and the knife that used to be on the shelf 12:00 P.M. on 06/06/06 I look at the time and now its twelve how could this be it was just nine Time went by fast or did I just lose track cuz I could swear I had the time But I see a sudden movement and it’s the reflection aiming the gun My mind is thinking fast saying out loud “The end of my life it is done” It fired a bullet went inside my arm causing an extremity of pain Then I hit the mirror and it shattered the glass and I’m feeling the strain Lost Track of Time My knuckles was covered with blood, cuts, and the glass in my head I had just punched my reflection, and my head is all covered in red I think I’m dead seeing things that I thought I will never see before Just recapping what I just saw and what happen, thinking what’s in store The distorted reflection, pieces of the mirror, just took a glance I ran for the phone and used my last energy to call the ambulance 6:00 A.M. on 06/06/06 Waking up and I’m in my bed relief that what just happen was a nightmare I thought wrong, when I went back to the room, the mirror sight stared My mind couldn’t think right I vomited wit all the confusions The blood on the mirror read……….. “The Mirror of Illusions” ???? What is this? as my heart started bumping and I’m my breathing heavier Then I felt a touch behind me, to know it was just something way more deadlier
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  STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-16-05, 07:23 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 4EBF 2570
Here We Are.. In A Society Where Imprisionment and Embeslment Is A Curupt Violation.. That Oversees The Laws In A Nation That Welcomes Personification.. Where Labelism and Favorism Still Polutes Our Womens Right of Freedom.. When Even Those Who Stand For The Law Chose To Abuse and Beat Them.. A Place Where Goods Are Wasted and Obesisty Is A Nationwide Concern.. Where Kids Can't Go To College Cause It Costs Sixty Thousand To Learn.. Why Price The Gift of Knowledge That'll Only Progress The State of Humanity.. But Yet Goverment Costs Care More About Those In Depression and Insanity.. A Nation In A State of Subliminal Paranoia Aroused By Vicious Attacks.. But Why When We Ask For Help..Do Our Leaders Just Turn Their Backs?? Think About It.. Who Pledged Under Oath To Serve and Protect Us With Immense Decisions? But Tore Through The Nations Heart When He Neglected Terroists Invisions.. Hands Covered In Blood, Fallen Soilders In-Which He Conceals In His Arms.. Its The Demise of Future Generations That He Secretly Holds In His Palms.. Democratic Parties That Promised So Much but Haven't Delievered Wit Time.. Open Your Eyes...Your Not Blind...Think and Relinquish Your Feeble Mind... Look Beyond The Appearent..and Let Go of The Things That You Hold Sacred.. But I Must Warn You...What You Discover Will Fill Your Heart With Hatred.. If You're Ready To Free-Fall and Live Life...Then You Must Grab My Hand... Follow Your Heart and Don't Stray off The Path of Footsteps In The Sand... Follow Me..Don't Be Scared Welcome To The Gates of Perpetual Truth Where Forever Your Life Will Change.. Where You'll Realize Your All Puppets On Strings Performing Life On A Stage.. What Freedom Do You Have? Restrictions and Tribulations Which Hold You Down.. The Puppet Master You Call The Government Which Controls Your Leaps & Bounds.. The Judicial System With Its Crooked Cops and Judges..How Do They Hold Peace.. And Those Who Hold Gods Grace...Only To That of A Unworthy Unsuffical Priest.. Where Religion and Morals Are Unjustifed and Spit On By The Ignorant Minded.. Where The Greed of Money and Fame Has Left The Few Pure and Innocent Blinded.. That Is The Justified Truth..To Leave Your Mind State In A Mist of Confusion.. Now You Know That What You Thought Was Right..Was Just A Mirror of Illusions.. Gods Son ~R~ |
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06-16-05, 07:33 PM
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QU3 M! D3$T!NO 3$ M! UN!CO 3N3M!GO
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This was feedback posted for R-Rated
IP: 00A2 4ED0
juist checkin the pollz.........................................
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06-16-05, 09:12 PM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: 2E7E 4D00
Uppin This Battle..Please Don't Sleep ~R~ |
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06-16-05, 09:43 PM
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Poet's Daughter.
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This was feedback posted for R-Rated
IP: 5405 D433
Checking this shit out..........Good drop R-Rated.
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mystery Is a Freak!! ITawAPuddyKat: Yeah, I guess. But I won't be a Lesbo for life. Smartone Freal: oh so u DO have plans of turnin str8 ITawAPuddyKat: Well Yes, Yes I do. Smartone Freal:  ITawAPuddyKat: Lol, all smiles aren't we? Lol Smartone Freal: lol yea i cant hide what i think bout u Smartone Freal: ITawAPuddyKat: ...Oh, what DO you think about me? Lol Smartone Freal: lol sorry thats private ITawAPuddyKat: EWWWWWWW..*Sigged* |
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06-17-05, 02:50 AM
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
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IP: D44E DE4F
Vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn Cock Fuckers.. ~R~ |
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06-17-05, 07:37 AM
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#10
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IP: A0C8 44A9
Voted For: R-Rated
R-Rated.... This was a wicked drop man, really feeling this.. Removed |
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06-17-05, 07:41 AM
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IP: A0C8 44A9
I'm a fuck tard, I'll go get that removed..
You can both e-punch me in the face.. |
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06-17-05, 07:57 AM
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#12
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Ka.Nek.ShuN
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This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
IP: 7F23 8EDF
polllllllllllllllzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz zzzzzzzzzzzz
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06-17-05, 09:04 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 473F 6D42
uppin this man cmon pplz vote stop sleepin
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STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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06-17-05, 10:41 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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This was feedback posted for Pen N' Paper
IP: 31E1 91F6
checkinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn pollllllllllllllllsssssssssssss
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06-17-05, 06:17 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: R-Rated
well R Rated i Think That You Wrote a very Long Long Topical drop and im pretty sure thats why its gettin slept on .lOL so Lemme shorten my explantion A whole lot LOL ...Aii your Creativity was sort of lacked in this drop But Yoru Way of Originality and point of view was terrific LOL not To be a d/r or nuttin like that but The only thing that was really lacked was creativity and not by that much jus by a lil ..so thats why It really wasnt your best drop ive seen you do so Ima give you the vote i liked your storyline a whole lot more than pen and paper I feel that you should still work on your creativity Pen N' Paper Aii Man You Drop was kinda crazy ..> iMean Not Your style its jsu your Story line opf this specific drop so Ima jus Sayin That you should work on that specifically I Cant Give you The vote Im sorry to say its jus that i wasnt feeling your drop all that too much .....sorry RTF In any battle link in my sig |
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