Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio |
12-10-06, 07:20 PM | #1 | ||||
Ike
|
Ike - Half Full, Half Empty ( Will RTF )
IP: 5006 8890
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3121643
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post3121650 aright... this was for the 1st round of LE's tourney.... im definitely re recording this song..and adding a 3rd verse...already have some of it written...BUT..i may put the one im writing for the 3rd..in the 1st...and switch em around...so PLEASE tell me if you like how i come in..thats important... i quick mixed this...please give some constructive criticism cause im re recording and dropping it on the next cd....thanks www.soundclick.com/youngike Half Full, Half Empty
__________________
|
||||
12-10-06, 07:42 PM | #2 | ||||
On The Air - COMIN JAN 07
|
IP: A644 4EFD
im listening right now
this shit sounds pretty professional I dont think that the beat fits ur topic that well though....it sounds more like one of those rnb type beats that you'd do a love song to...iono the lyrics are pretty dope though...really like this........the lyrics and the emotion plus the hook really make up for the beat but the beat does sound pretty commercial def. could see this being on an album.....not a mixtape..this is more professional...real talk |
||||
12-10-06, 08:43 PM | #3 | |||
Addicted
|
IP: E42F B208
beat choice fits you....i culdent do this.....quality is coo it seems like the beat is clashin wit your vox i dunno hook in the beggin i think u should crossfade it so the hook culd come in cleaner....delivery is coo i like it...lyrics is coo.....this is sum shit that u can jus listen n drink a few beers n shit....in the hook lower the highs a lil....gud song man.....
|
|||
12-10-06, 09:00 PM | #4 | ||||
I don't lose
|
IP: 7994 4630
come walk with me ike....n ill let you in of what i feel of this ight?
its good shit i told you that but now lets get picky the back back back part...up up up the dubs so it hits harder...put a lil echo on the dubs of that too so it resinates in your ears... again up the volume on the my love part if you can make the "dammit i got a life to find" part a lil more emotional.... the hook - up the volume of the half empty half full parts....it would resinate more in your ears..... second verse in my opinion follows the directon of the first flowwise too much....the verse your writing i hope has a lil different direction to make me want to be sure to listen to the whole thing over n over....not just parts of it..... i didnt hear too much in the second verse that could be improved that would make it that much better like in the first....but some real feed for a real good song....rtf on "fly away"
__________________
well i thought about the army
dad said, son you're fucking high and i thought, yeah there's a first for everything so i took my old man's advice three sad semesters it was only fifteen grand spent in bed i thought about the army i dropped out and joined a band instead |
||||
12-10-06, 11:08 PM | #5 | ||||
Sam Dope
|
IP: E36B 6FE3
Man, you fucking suck. Stop rapping.
|
||||
12-11-06, 05:33 AM | #6 | |||||||
I'm Talented.Period.
|
IP: 40C2 F668
Please RTF on "The Audition"
I like beats like this, esp. when I'm in a "deep" mood. Your flow on this was perfect on here. As for the hook, I could hear someone like Triple being effective on it. I loved the introspective lyrics. 7.5-8/10 Good 1 1 |
|||||||
12-11-06, 08:20 AM | #7 | ||||||
...Closer Look...
|
IP: 94E6 25F7
I Like This Beat!
you came in quite well,yeah and i like the emotion put to this lyrics are nice i'm feeling 'em hook is good too...sounds just nice! about the mixing ijust think u shud just turn your hi's a lil down..just a LITTLE! and yeah i think ima wait for the new version...cos i think this was a nice track u can sit back and reflect to and just chill with it! Hit Mines..Thanx
__________________
Hit This Up And I'll Hit Your's Too
Yvonne-Early In The Morning S.K.M Quote:
Quote:
Now That's Wassup! |
||||||
12-11-06, 01:37 PM | #8 | ||||
Ike
|
IP: 5006 8890
thanks for the feed people...favors have been returned
__________________
|
||||
12-11-06, 09:54 PM | #9 | ||||
Ike
|
IP: 5006 8890
upp fuckers....
__________________
|
||||
12-11-06, 10:28 PM | #10 | |||||
The Paragraph President
|
IP: 1F19 D2B9
hmm quality sounds wierd, but yo I think it's my comp cuz even the beat sound bad. but yo that dont matter anyway lol cuz I know it's my comp. I'm feelin this beat kinda reminds of ya remix to that one lady track. You talkin bout ya love n shit; very good lyrics. I'm mad lovin ya hook, it's catchy as fuck props wit that. Word I'm mad feelin this joint, props with that shit man. I downloaded it
rtf here: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238049
__________________
|
|||||
12-13-06, 01:47 AM | #12 | ||||
L.E
|
IP: A70E 7938
I liked this track man.
Quality is mad crisp...you gotta tell me what process you use to do that shit. Liking the flow, and I also like the concept. Hook is pretty good...but I have heard better from you. Delivery was not as good as your past stuff, but still acceptable. Good stuff man. |
||||
12-13-06, 03:02 AM | #13 | |||||
™
|
IP: 5A36 D0C3
listening...
beat is dope, but like Past said i'm not 100% positive it fits your topic quite right... your flow is on point as usual and presence is there... i would consider changing how you come in though, i see what you're saying, it just seems to kinda jump in. thats pretty much it, it sounds pretty professional, but i can see it improving two-fold with a re-make...
__________________
"Motherfuck a struggle, lets dance in the rain"
★ G ☆ U ★ N ☆ N ★ E ☆ R ★ |
|||||
12-13-06, 11:45 AM | #14 | ||||
Ike
|
IP: 5006 8890
thanks a lot everybody....i appreciate it...and the favors have been returned..if u didnt drop a link...feel free
__________________
|
||||
Thread Tools | Search this Thread |
Display Modes | |
|
|