Iight i never did a keystyle before

If your alive today its because of that Eve ate that apple*
So im doin her job today,merkin you in a short sample/
But everybody knows that shed puke it if she knew that
But shes eat it to repuke it up if shed knew u started to rap/
Armada's talking about bitch's and nice childrens
hes 31 one watchin kid porn and still a fucking vergin/
If he types so badly its bcuz teres sperm between the letters
Same lyrics everytime,cuz his keyboard's all sticked togetter/
But mister's dissin canada with his stereotip and shit
Im a rock fan![sarcasme] imma fuck you up in a mochpit!/**
He sounds like he have the same portrait than Hephaitos
Without the power....only the shame and the ridiculous/***

Keystyle!
*Adam & Eve
** Quebec = Rock people or rap hater[Sarcasme]
***One of Zeus's child,hes the uglyes of the family

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it's good for a beginner, but you have a LONG way to go man....work on your flow most of all.....i don't exactly like your rhyme scheme once but i guess its your first time so yea.....keep workin at it and you'll get better!! can you crit my shit? here's my link, i'll post it when i get it lol

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thx...upppiinnn

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so thats the big diss that took you a month to get ready and drop?

well ima say it was ight, im not gonna be a lili hater in say it was weak cuz it wasnt it was ight ya punches were a little foolish at some points but sort of creative

ide hit u back real quick but ive squashed beef wit the E.F. so ima jus say good job elevate on some harder punches n maybe a few hard personals

I mean if i wasnt me i could tare myself up like a motha fucker
hmmmm i mite drop a diss aganst myself that would be great