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04-01-06, 02:41 PM | #1 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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"Holdin On"<(UNF HARD TARGET AND ENVEE)>OHHHH SHIIIT BOOOI!
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www.soundclick.com/unf Word Verse One:Unf Hook:H.T Verse Two:Unf/Envee Hook:H.T Verse Three:Envee Yeah,I Got The Open Collab From H.T's Site And Laced This Ish Up,Im Kinda Goin Through A Hard Target Phase Lol Leave Links I'll RTF! Left Feed: Too E Zee-Teenage Love http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2706419 Apexx-Rap Chicks http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2706435
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04-01-06, 03:22 PM | #2 | |||||
You Cant Handle The Truth
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diggin' this beat kiddie...flow on point here by everyone, hooks' tyte cuz H.T. is that nigga lol...verses are all good man, the tone of the track and everything are tyte...keep it up dude...you're making better songs all the time |
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04-01-06, 05:09 PM | #3 | |||||||
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Thanks....Upp!!!!!!!!!......
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04-02-06, 04:43 AM | #4 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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uppppppppppppppppp
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04-02-06, 11:36 AM | #5 | |||||||
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Beat is tight.
1st verse - Delivery is aight. Flow is aight. Lyrics are ok, nothin special. Whoever did the hook got that Nate Dogg voice lol, sick delivery tho 2nd verse - same thing as i said before 2nd person - quality could be better, needs to turn the vocals up. Delivery is good, flow was good. lyrics are good too. lol these adlib screaming are funny, i dont know if that's the intention tho. good shit overall tho, keep it up |
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04-02-06, 04:45 PM | #6 | |||||||
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Ok?
My delivery was better than his,And my flows the same just slower anyway uppppp
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04-08-06, 05:01 AM | #7 | |||||||
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beats comin in nice...like that shit ur dion w the libs n all
1st - lvls r good...articulate a bit more man...flows nice...emotions here n shit...lyrics r meanfull but not great samples r nice n shit 2nd of 1st verse nice..libs are good here....see..make sure u pronounce ur words better..hard to hear u a bit..might b something ur mixing it with too....again..like the samples..this beats nice too... .the ARRRR is nice...the psychopathitic shits hot..this an't you is it ???????? hmmm.....don't think it was..but it was nice RTF if u will http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=225893
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