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01-10-05, 03:32 PM
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IP: 8E70 C31B
My friend wrote it.. She died of suicide and that was her suicide note.
..the knife deepens.. ..blood circulates out.. ..iam lightheaded.. ..life is going to waste.. ..dance around the razor.. ..watching the delicate point.. ..just one bad move.. ..and then you'll be cut.. ..we have nothin to live for.. ..no one to live for.. ..if i died at my first love.. ..i would have died at four.. ..leave the razor gory.. ..leave my family crying.. ..leave relatives lost.. ..and forever be gone.. |
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01-10-05, 08:15 PM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
the sad thing about this, is that the poem was "experienced".. in which the reader can't give props to the writer because he/she has died.. the content was blunt and to the point which made it more emotional-- i felt.. this is one of those things where you just don't know what to say, but condolensces to your friend..
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01-10-05, 09:24 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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wow, i'm at a loss for words,i cannot say that this was an emotional poem, because i can see by reading it that your friend felt empty, and thats usually the way people who commit suicide feel about life, that its empty and theres nothing left....this was deep to me and hit home, i have friends who have done this and those who have tried...this was very kind of you to post this up in your friends honor, considering it was the last thing they wrote....i feel your pain man..and be strong...holla pc
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