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11-24-03, 09:25 PM | #1 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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so whats your birth weight? soft focus (calisto~deacon~emotion) dont sleep on this
IP: CB2E 7CE0
Calisto: Mother
Masquerading day to day, deciding whether to cry or celebrate This breathless wonder within me beats, but congers up such hate My decision with other’s thoughts, life or death I daringly designate Cutting circulation, a life on these strings, I reluctantly breathe Consequences weren’t present within the act of being conceived But he didn’t ask for this, it was my fault for naively believing Yet wondering what soul could place blame for such elation Who could bask in the misery of untimeliness, during celebration? Wondering how God could bestow a blessing as such devastation? I’m panicking during the day and wide awake in the evening Contemplating the realness of this life, if it’s not breathing But inevitably this precious being from my body is leaving Deacon: ~Baby~ Caught in-between a decision… Locked your insides to a weaker minds incision... A needle with perfect placement implements my stamina You rectified the problem by killing, did you think you’d reach an answering Hate flares to an unlucky medium, pick my casket some toilet paper and a soap bar. Clean yourself cause im dirt...the little in me is hardly worth… Time to spend happily, encountered through a lovely 20 minutes of ecstasy, Romantically, You divorced me and cursed me to a death, I lived inside a wall I didn’t even get to believe I could breathe yet, I fall, a short distance into acceptance, Receptive listening you’ll hear me make a splash, im finished My only touch, confused because pc bullshit… Retire me from pride to boast a worthless wishlist… How can you do that when theres nobody witnessing. Except the man with the green white shirt, “oh him well he’s just visiting” Worthless tempered fool makes more money than my body was worth, He scraps me from her insides and claims he loves child's birth… I hate you, I hate you, reject a single me, I wish i had a single sight a place where i should be I hate you, I hate you, infect me with this disease You wish you had a second chance i just wish that i could breathe I breathe a breath, i breathe Im a seed that lacked its soil, i just wanted to be normal, God saw a different side of me, saw a light you couldn't see Emotion: a person who is pro choice It's her body her choice, It's Her decision her voice, A man cant understand this, How a women cant handle this, Why should a child grow up unloved, When it's unwanted, but can be cherished from above, The love is a nonetity, The baby was never meant for an identity, It's a contempt decision, But are you sure you've done revision?, Because a babeys just not a financial obligation, Its not an assination, God seeks no retribution,Abortion? Male Pig it's her decision,She wants to make a mistake? It's her infliction, Dont worry about conscience cause' it will slowly fade, It wasnt youre fault, dont let any one ever call you a slut cause you got laid,
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) |
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11-24-03, 10:59 PM | #2 | |||||||
I Am The Light
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IP: CB2E 7CE0
booo upiy up
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SOFT FOCUS crew record (3-0) Wits end ~ DOI ~ Central....now who's next? sacred scriptures record (5-0) |
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11-24-03, 11:13 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 0D29 2657
dog i hit up ure shit on poetic scriptures would u mind hittin mine up? if u can get ure crew to hit it up that would be nice as well then ill come back and return the favor thanks peace
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11-25-03, 04:56 AM | #4 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 5BAF 9D2E
uppin this ....
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11-25-03, 04:09 PM | #5 | ||||||
Banned
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IP: B910 8CBB
nice shit dogg
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11-26-03, 12:52 AM | #6 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 4013 53EF
what was that...b good for proper reply
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12-07-03, 05:47 AM | #7 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 4013 53EF
wtf??? wheres the replys
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12-07-03, 09:09 AM | #8 | ||||||
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IP: 261B 829D
This was a good collab.. Whetehr it was intentional, there was some good alliteration in parts.. The last verse I think was the only one to use mutlis..
A man cant understand this, How a women cant handle this, All the people on this collab dropped very nicely.. There wasn't no quotables.. But it did make a good read |
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12-07-03, 07:59 PM | #9 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 4013 53EF
thanks^^^
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Soft focus Whats the point of living? The voices in my head Feat. Rule Unlikely Alias More Comming soon! |
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12-07-03, 08:26 PM | #10 | |||
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IP: A9A7 727D
reply to three other open mics and post links to your replies in this thread, or it gets deleted. you guys already know this shit.
thanks.
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12-07-03, 10:03 PM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 4013 53EF
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9840#post969840
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96433 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97001 there you go......
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12-07-03, 10:30 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 54F1 AB26
This is one of the dopest collab I've read on here....Calisto cameout wit a dope opener "Masquerading day to day, deciding whether to cry or celebrate" , Hot Line dawg....And his structure , rhyme scheme and content were all nice , he stayed on topic and never fell off....Deacon was also dope , again he cameout wit a hot opener and stayed on that level throughout his verse....Some of his line swere kinda stretched though....But I Liked your style , multis and rhyme scheme...U also had a goodamount of vocab usage....And Emotion's content and structure were dope...His verse was on topic , and his wordplay was sick.....Overall i give this collab a 10/10
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12-07-03, 10:32 PM | #13 | |||||||
Middle Weight
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IP: 4013 53EF
cheers for the reply^^^
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