SkiddZ:
I am woven to protect you, from Bullets aimed to take Your life
I am Your Chosen Protector, Giving You Confidence to Fight
Without me, there’d probably be no you, Your Headstrong
I protect your heart, But its Not me, When Your Heads gone
I’d go out and take a beating, so that You can leave Breathing
Teflon Hole from a Bullet, When your Exposed at Drug Meetings
I’m your protector, I stand by you, Until the date of your fall
As I’d go out to protect You, You do the same to Protect All
The People living in the streets, daily life goes by Unconsciously
Until that day, life is threatened, they can see Lights from Heaven
But You come like A messenger, and you are Protecting…
Because obviously, Heaven is Not Accepting…
And Im your partner..Lesser known, But You can find I save Lives
I’m the Strong Silent Type, I can’t keep you awake..Patrolling the Nights
But You know I stand by You..Like Breast Reduction, I got ya Chest
Nonetheless, My loyalty is there for You , I’m made by You…
And Im not living so I can’t judge to give You Nothing Less..
Bullet sizes of whatever, I lessen the Pain, But I can’t Save Your Brain
I mean it Physically and Metaphorically, But you called My excuses Lame
I told You, I can help out situations, But Im only worn on Your chest
I can’t help You when Your Ego seems to Go To your head..
Likewise when A Bullet seems to be aimed at or beyond the Neck..

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The odour of daily life... the daily strife always repeating
It maybe tonight that death entices me to meet him
Don't speak in the meeting... what he says will be important
If you're on the road back to life... learn to run before you walk it
But me? I got protection... a reflection on our ways
Built to foil another creation that our nation use to play
Deflecting the intentions of others who want to harm me
If you don't have one of these then they won't need an army
You'll be open to conflict... convicted of negligence
The sentence is death... but the judges... they have no sense
But I have one so I walk... and talk with inhabitants
See a crime from time to time.... but now I can challenge it
Thats what lead to my fate... being shorter than estimated
Confidence raising fast... coz nothin can hit my chest and break it
I've escalated my ego to a point when I see shit
I try to sort it out with no thought..... I could be hit
Superman... I'm made of steel... what I say is real
Nuthin gonna stop me.... or top the way I feel
Dangerous encounter with a juvenile blew my smile...
right off my face...
...disgraced to find he knew my style... and unloaded a case...
But instead of pain it was numbness... and I fell to the floor dead
He didn't aim at the vest...
he aimed at the forehead...........

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Dope piece..Creative..never heard of an idea like this before..
SkiddZ piece..Flowed well..vocab was dope..you approached it so well..
Nothing but quality from you all the time..
Com's piece..Also flowed nicely..it kind of lost me for you were saying the same thing SkiddZ had already said..
But then when it had gotten to the ending..you ended it beautifully..
It was all in all a very witty piece..love the idea..very very creative..
Props..lovely..

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Retarded people's heads are to big..I'll be back with something just as funny as watching the Special Olympics..don't worry..

He said the same thing because I took the part of the Bullet Proof Vest, and He was the Actual Cop

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very good peice, Skiddz, good opening verse, nice vocab and wordplay, flowed very well
Com, also a ver good peice, ended very creatively, good flow and form
great peice overall
hit my peice up if you can thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...661#post1139661

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DOPE~~~~~~~~~~~this is imagery at it's finest~~~~~~you guys came up with a great concept where in the world did you come up with this~~~I have a great concept too....I think I'm going to write about a guy having his nightmares come true..wow~~~I can't believe I thought of all of that on my own~~~I'm cool~~~~
anyway,this was great...this probaly be the 1st Om nod. for month of feb...good work fellas!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(Skiddz tried to kill me!!!!!!!!!!

thx guys... this was my first open mic too.....all feedback is appreciated

Wack.

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^nice way to set an example on feedback.....

and people wonder why RB is going down the pan.....

Don't Worry about Edicius..I'll handle him

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Skiddz man, u elevated since the last time i read your things, very nice, Creative & a good immagery .. your vocab was like word o.O on the points were needed adn the flow was good.. the story telling in here was dope..

Com, for a first time open mic, u did well, i like ur story telling aswell, good vocab, & flow was good aswell.. lol..nice concept used ..u guys collabed very well, .. hope to see more from u com .. props to both ..

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oh........thanx man......... ignore the above comment ......lmao

Stop Crying you sluts!, i was typing another reply, .. in the mean time.. psst, i wuv skiddZ.. i always reply dope o.O

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ill drop...both came hard...
both verses were ill in all aspects...
ill concept...

favorite lines...

"I’d go out and take a beating, so that You can leave Breathing
Teflon Hole from a Bullet, When your Exposed at Drug Meetings"

ill as fuck...

"Dangerous encounter with a juvenile blew my smile...
right off my face...
...disgraced to find he knew my style... and unloaded a case...
But instead of pain it was numbness... and I fell to the floor dead
He didn't aim at the vest...
he aimed at the forehead..........."

couldnt end it any better...

Keep Spittin...

uppin...............................