Yo...I'll leave your ass dead in da ocean
with no sign of motion
you'll be pounding up against each wave
all because i slaughtered you and gave u a watery grave
i worked your bitch like a slave
but now u found out and you did nuthin but stand and shout
you pissed me off now your sleepin wit da trout
and i dont even know what dis' is all about
all i know is dat dis' is my new song
and i'm gonna keep on goin' without doing a thing wrong
so let me drink that vodka, smoke some weed, and hit da bong
because i'm gonna make this verse so fuckin' long
dat you woulda thought it was my 6 foot shlong
but damn i get so horny when i see dat thong
dat's da time i go and do a song
just ta get this shit off my chest then i could just sit and rest
when i'm done rappin' fo' da rest of you pests
i'm getting blessed with some pussy and breasts
hell...i just do shit dat rhymes
and i've done it a million times
inspite the fact that i'm white i could rap all nite
cause i'm doin what i think is right
if eminem and bubba sparxxx got the fury of sharks
then i can spit too
i just have to bust through the racial slurr
even though i'm so unsure i must endure
i keep on spittin' til' everything becomes a blurr
so as i pull out da gun this song is done

c'mon people let's get feedback flowin in

aight this post was 'ok' but nothin special. i liked most of tha lines but tha killing/dissin topic aint real to me unless you really express your anger or at least say a person's name.some of your lyrical content was sketchy and your vocab was kinda basic but still it's decent.


*if eminem and bubba sparxxx got the fury of sharks
then i can spit too*
i just have to bust through the racial slurr
even though i'm so unsure i must endure
*i keep on spittin' til' everything becomes a blurr
so as i pull out da gun this song is done*

these lines with tha * around it didn't have a line that rhymed with 'em and that pretty much threw the ending off but i still give it a 6.5/10. keep droppin & return tha favor.1.

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too bad i don't have a mic i could do so much more wit it....how much r they?

dont know myself

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uppin on feed....