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Funn D. Mentals | 1 | 16.67% | |
Tekneek | 5 | 83.33% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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06-17-05, 04:10 PM | #1 | |
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Tekneek vs Funn D. Mentals
IP: 21ED 60C1
Battle Rules:
10- unlimted Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting good luck fam......... Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 06-17-05 at 05:10 PM Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in. Closed - Expired / old battle win |
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06-17-05, 04:33 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Funn D. Mentals has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 04:33 PM.
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06-17-05, 04:47 PM | #3 | |
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IP: B1A5 868C
Tekneek has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-17-05 04:47 PM.
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06-17-05, 04:56 PM | #4 | |
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IP: B1A5 868C
Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section
Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool 'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread
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06-17-05, 05:20 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!,
You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!.. Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!! Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!! Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!! And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!! I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool, Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!! My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!! Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements..!! Good Luck..!! - Easy
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<fieldset> Funn D. Mentals Yes, Yes..!! My Rhymes Is Essential.. Rap Verse Battle Rek. 000::000::000 Battles I'm In.!! Funn D. Mentals vs. Tekneek (Need Votes!) Funn D. Mentals vs. Eph (Need Votes!) Owned Souls..!! <marquee>None Yet!!..</marquee> </fieldset> |
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06-17-05, 05:23 PM | #6 | |
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IP: ECB3 36A0
not dab,,,,,,not bad at all.............
good luck.
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06-17-05, 05:35 PM | #7 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Funn D. Mentals
Aii This is What I thinks TekNeek Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection ...Nuttin Specail.. So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool 'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u ...Good Bar ...But Watch out for the self- Glorification... tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance ...LOL I didnt get it at first LOL Nice Mayne And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in ...no Punch jus a diss...< So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread ....Ok...... Overall i think That You Should try to Work more on Hitting at your oppenent instead of boosting yourself up bcuz youll lose votes that way so ......work on that Funn D. Mentals Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!, You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!.. ....Ok.... Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!! Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!! ...LOL That was Good qordplay... Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!! And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!! /.....Nuttin specail.. I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool, Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!! ....Good wordplay.. My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!! Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements LOL Good... Aii Overall I Think That YUo take this battle bcuz you hade some very good wordplay but you dont have any direct punchez toward your oppenent then your gonna lose your next battle ...and work on fixing your structure bcuz the shit is sloppy man make it look like tekneeks and itll be easier to read ........And youll win yo next battle if you take this advice RTF In Any battle link in my sig or You Will stay on my list of peeps who dont Return The Favour |
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06-17-05, 05:41 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
1-0 Uppin..
I'll Return the favor as soon as I get 20 post Stanza trust!.. Thanks For Voting. - Easy
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<fieldset> Funn D. Mentals Yes, Yes..!! My Rhymes Is Essential.. Rap Verse Battle Rek. 000::000::000 Battles I'm In.!! Funn D. Mentals vs. Tekneek (Need Votes!) Funn D. Mentals vs. Eph (Need Votes!) Owned Souls..!! <marquee>None Yet!!..</marquee> </fieldset> |
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06-17-05, 05:47 PM | #9 | |
Banned: Biting
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IP: 3240 794D
Aii Man Ima Hold You To That ......................
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06-17-05, 06:26 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin This..
Let us get some votes in here.. - Easy
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<fieldset> Funn D. Mentals Yes, Yes..!! My Rhymes Is Essential.. Rap Verse Battle Rek. 000::000::000 Battles I'm In.!! Funn D. Mentals vs. Tekneek (Need Votes!) Funn D. Mentals vs. Eph (Need Votes!) Owned Souls..!! <marquee>None Yet!!..</marquee> </fieldset> |
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06-18-05, 07:41 AM | #11 | |
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IP: ECB3 36A0
up................................................ ........
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06-18-05, 05:03 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 0825 899A
Uppin.......................................!!
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<fieldset> Funn D. Mentals Yes, Yes..!! My Rhymes Is Essential.. Rap Verse Battle Rek. 000::000::000 Battles I'm In.!! Funn D. Mentals vs. Tekneek (Need Votes!) Funn D. Mentals vs. Eph (Need Votes!) Owned Souls..!! <marquee>None Yet!!..</marquee> </fieldset> |
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06-22-05, 11:50 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 258C A279
Voted For: Tekneek
Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection coo opener So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool 'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u self-glorification here tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance aight.. And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in nice So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread okay Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!, nope You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!.. Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!! aight Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!! Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!! 2nd line was wack And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..!! no I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool, Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!! decent My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!! Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements..!! coo closer overall Tekneek took this one.. punches were just a little harder flow was aight.. & the structure was good.. Funn.. work on ur flow cuz ur shit was mad-long here.. & both elevate a little more on ur punches.. & add some personas against ur opponents n’ shit
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06-23-05, 01:39 AM | #14 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 4A1F 188B
Voted For: Tekneek
Dude, I'm Bout To "Bring Disaster", When I Attack Your Ligaments, And Your Spleen In Plastered..!!, You'll Scream I'm Master..!! When I "Burn Your Disk" Like My Surreal Hits Is Teamed With Napster!!!.. ^^decent Win? Just Dream You Bastard..!! Nay Bitch Go..!(Nabisco) Cause I Just Cream The Cracker..!! ^^didn't rhyme Give You A Clean Fracture..!!, Then "Freeze Your Ghost' Like Your "Soul's Scene" Was Captured..!! ^^what the hell Want Heat? I’ll "Burn Your Family Tree" Until The Whole Regime's Seen The Rapture..!! And ‘Smoke Your Cells’ Until I “Bust This Nut’ And It’s Hard To Keep Gene’s Wrapped Up..! ^^just stop I’m Erasing You Fool, You Could Dive In Boards! And I’ll Still Put Your Face In A Pool, Let You “Cool Off” Cause I’m Known To ‘Bring Out Tec’s” Like Athletes Breaking The Rules..!! ^^would have been good...if rhymed My Palms Will Hurt This Tyrant, And If This Con Show’s No Improvement..!! He’ll Have To Prove Sick..!! ^^rhyme!!!!!! Cause I’m Eligible To ‘Dispose Of Tec’s (Teks)’ Like Non Violent Movements..!! ^^gon finish that bar? U may have had sumtin there if ur shit rhymed.If ur shit dun rhyme...then it not a rap.And if it not a rap...then the other guy gotta suk real bad for u to win. Your bars don't connect son, Elite? You'd never belong in the section Shit, I ain't seen a worse form on Rv... since your fuckin' reflection ^^OK So ya think you're gonna fuck wid ma tekneek? Please, I'm a veteran, fool 'Cuz peeps only gotta check ma stats... to see I'm 3x better than u ^^whack.... tek stays smackin' these newbies, kids just ain't comin' with talent The type to rap like Mike in Still Tippin, claims he only lacks balance ^^^weak And kid stays on my dick! Reasearches my battles w/ hopes to win He believe he could fly... 'til his window of opportunity locked him in ^^nice So give up, you had ur chance at glory, don't let it go to your head Or my punches'll raise ya off the floor.. I'm baking this Wonderbread ^^wak You had a couple a nice punches in that shit.All you neeeded to do was bassicall make ur shit rhyme,which u did.So you won this shit easily. Vote-Tekneek(vote in link below homie,please) http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=194845 |
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06-23-05, 11:30 AM | #15 | |
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IP: ECB3 36A0
thx dog............................................... ...................................
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