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Old 01-29-04, 01:18 AM   #1
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my very first audio!!!(suks shit lol)

IP: 5043 32F4

ya this is my first!!! dun fukin hate on it just tell me how to improve plz!!!!!!
thank you!!!

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Old 01-29-04, 04:43 PM   #2
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lol yo man u got a work on this shit it dun sound studio quality

i can tell u don;t do audio much just work on your flow and you'll be find

ayo check some of my shit


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Old 01-31-04, 10:15 PM   #3
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^ of course it's not studio quality...most net tracks aren't, especially if it's his first time...

ok it's called "pistol diss"...who's pistol? you say Yo alot...lol...you need more emotion in ur verse..it sound like ur just readin...you need overdubs too, ask someone about that if u don't know what an Overdub is..it'll make it sound a lot better...ur quality is pretty bad too....ur flow is iight tho...u got a lot to work on tho...

6.0 out of 10..

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