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10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-01-06 at 11:01 PM

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mR iKiLL. has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-06 08:02 PM.

Ziq has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-01-06 08:05 PM.

Man,Fuck battlin. I'd rather ran in yo crib with the nine 8
And tell the judge u had to die someday, so why wait
Nigga check out my crime rate ...Yeah im grudy on the mic
But criminal thoughts leave pages bloody when i write
Im the type to kill Ziq then dig yo skelaton up ...
Just to bang heads with his skull till is Melon is crushed
U battlin random niggas to see if you'll luck up
Im a vet,you're a rookie Therefore you fucked up
Im tired of spittin on the net,cuz everybody all tough
Till they get ran up on,And they lung and they heart touch
Im Runnin thru Ziq ... no sweat ... It's no obstacle
Battle me again,and death is what ill promise you ...

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You Got Rhymes But I Heard It All Before Like Sunshine Anderson

I turned out wack,after my role models,no hate but true
That,that was durng the time, when I looked up to you
You cant breath,diseases,sickness and amneeshas a breeze
Plz,the only hard battles you won is when you barely survived these
Nice custom,looks like what you write after a line u'd make
Cuz ".................." looks alot better after a boring state
Youve shot guys,so I went to a school gym to see you blast some guy out
and I opened the doors quick,to a Western Show-down
with bare hands Ill have you clean up horse shit
And leave you thinking your famous,after finding your name on your fist

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Voted For: mR iKiLL.

I turned out wack,after my role models,no hate but true
That,that was durng the time, when I looked up to you
You cant breath,diseases,sickness and amneeshas a breeze
Plz,the only hard battles you won is when you barely survived these
Nice custom,looks like what you write after a line u'd make
Cuz ".................." looks alot better after a boring state

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Man,Fuck battlin. I'd rather ran in yo crib with the nine 8
And tell the judge u had to die someday, so why wait
Nigga check out my crime rate ...Yeah im grudy on the mic
But criminal thoughts leave pages bloody when i write
Im the type to kill Ziq then dig yo skelaton up ...
Just to bang heads with his skull till is Melon is crushed
U battlin random niggas to see if you'll luck up
Im a vet,you're a rookie Therefore you fucked up

Ziq-It was a decent verse, he showed more creativity than mR, but I wasn't feeling some of the punches from the way they were worded. It had a decent flow, but multi's would've made it better, along with wordplay & personals
mRiKILL- Had an overall better verse. His verse was more complex with flow, & direct with disses. Nothing special that raises your eye, but was consistent enough to get the win in my opinion.

Vote: mR iKILL

Uppin .

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Im A Punchline Champion ..
You Got Rhymes But I Heard It All Before Like Sunshine Anderson

Voted For: mR iKiLL.

not a very good battle from both sides.

Punches come more thick from iKill, aswell as textual flow. Were as you opponent had slightly better vocab, but hsi punches are weak as fuck and his entire verse is choppy and messy.

Up .

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| vs Raw King | vs OneStepBeyond |

Im A Punchline Champion ..
You Got Rhymes But I Heard It All Before Like Sunshine Anderson

Voted For: mR iKiLL.

ok ok ok let me see here


ok Mr iKiLL you got him barely but you got him you had the flow all the way through the battle you were on key you keep it up and didnt let off oy ukeep his head a spinning with personals and punches.

Ziq ok you had almost no personals or punches that conected in that hole verse you need to elevate and got to 1-2 punch to learn how to through a good one cause son you didnt have any.. and thats what wins battles punches and personals and you didnt have em.

So My Vote Goes to mR iKiLL.

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wow you guys dont think outta the box at all, jesus christ

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ZiqlAntonio BanderaslNahlidgelMimesislValorlTimlLed Poeticl
Nick FletcherlSelf Portraitl.Jae.Brix.l.Fallen.

Me vs Raw King (tryout for any crew at this point)

cmon kid. it was a weak verse against a weak verse. and mine was a little better. i dont even like text battlin'

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| vs Raw King | vs OneStepBeyond |

Im A Punchline Champion ..
You Got Rhymes But I Heard It All Before Like Sunshine Anderson

Up .

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| vs Raw King | vs OneStepBeyond |

Im A Punchline Champion ..
You Got Rhymes But I Heard It All Before Like Sunshine Anderson

Voted For: mR iKiLL.

Im not sure but I think Ziq bit that wak verse from some were. I honestly didn't like this battle at all though. not because u guys suck or anything...theres talent there. its just that mr iKill used to much gangster theme shit in his verse which is not creative at all for a text battle. I liked some punches on his verse but none of them were really directed towards ziq and he needs to use more metaphors and personals. ziq needs to fix his flow and structure. the way u read it should be the way u say it. if its even a little off then its gonna sound weird while we are reading it.

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