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01-25-06, 02:01 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Fireman(RemiX)Open Collab!!!!!!!!!!!
IP: B4AB A895
Yeahh!!!!!!!! Need Someone To Lace The 2nd Verse Holla At me http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/...97&content=song Left Feed: Seven Third N Tito http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220147 Do You Like to Get Stoned? Tha Q http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220485 You Dont Wanna Know!
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01-25-06, 02:58 PM | #2 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: B4AB A895
Uppppppppppppppppp
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01-25-06, 07:58 PM | #3 | |||
Dope Like Whoa
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IP: FA36 AB97
Me and Ike already owned this shit yo.
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01-25-06, 10:27 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 4702 1F81
nice choice for beat...wish u wouldnt of kept the hook...not really feelin ur style and lyrics need a bit elevation but u flow pretty well for me...keep at it
peep me:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=220467
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01-26-06, 02:28 AM | #5 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: A23D ABD7
Thanks Will Do When i Get Home
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01-26-06, 10:35 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: 4534 F183
i love that beat... one of my favorite instrumentals... but u shoulda flipped it different n used a diff hook... be more original... u kno? content in here was arite... flow was there... overall decent tracc...
stay up...
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01-26-06, 12:18 PM | #7 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 97A1 1E68
Thanks.....................
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01-26-06, 03:53 PM | #8 | |||||
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IP: 0825 899A
dis beats pretty tuff...yea i dont like da original hook dat u used on hea...lyricz is ok..flows str8...not really feelin ya delivery dawg...overall dis was decent...
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01-27-06, 05:38 AM | #9 | |||||
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IP: C9E3 41C0
pretty nice ish unf...i unno i like ya flow and delivery on this lyrics is str8...hit me up i'll collab this if its still open.
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01-27-06, 10:56 AM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 0AC8 1559
pretty coo
plws coo, deliverys coo, emotions coo, i dont liek ure voice tho, but not everyone will so what u gunna do right.. its pretty nice drop. just work on ure speech Feed used 1/27/06 "Finding The Answer"
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01-27-06, 12:37 PM | #11 | |||||||
Nt Your Average
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IP: 77D7 FEEA
Thanks.......
Yeah ex get on it
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01-27-06, 05:12 PM | #12 | ||||||
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IP: 58B7 2299
Yuck.
Im not feeling the way u chose to attack this beat. It's not kosher. Tooooooo slow and no empahisis. i dont understand why u used lil wayne chorus. Thats a no no. im just not feeling this at all. Elevate Feed used 1/27/06 "How We Shoot Rmx"
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01-27-06, 08:50 PM | #13 | ||||
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IP: 46E3 3347
man out of all tha cats that got on this beat.......you came da weakest......ya lyrics aint that bad but damn man ya gotta work on ya voice cuz that shit is annoyin, this is juss me i been listenin to ya songs each time i hear hear good lyrics but ya delivery and voice isn't quite there.......maybe it'll get better when ya get a lil older, cuz ur voice rite now is still high so....aiite man keep droppen......
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01-28-06, 02:19 PM | #14 | ||||||
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IP: FA88 0BE7
This Beat Is Hot buy mad on my nerves fam, man ya ya voice do need werk, and that flow is offf.... u got semi ootential but u need alot of work dawgy..work on that shit..and ill peep more of your shit
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01-30-06, 09:45 AM | #15 | |||||
Is Betta Than You
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IP: 7A52 73B1
Nice Shyt UNF, dope lyrics n delivery, ay can i still get on that second verse, cuz i been waiting to rip this beat yo!!, anyway yea dunno what them niggaz was sayin, im mos def feelin this shyt yo, keep em comin!
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