Battle Rules:

6-10 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
House Rules.
No Bullshit.


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-18-05 at 12:49 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.

Black Arts has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 06:57 PM.

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Explanations:

*Nelson Muntz is the bully in the Simpsons
**Kid from Kid N' Play had the highest fade back in the day
***his name is spelt incorrectly; it should be spelt "illest"

Illist has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-17-05 07:42 PM.

uppin......

Can someone vote?

Drop links n I'll return the favor.

Voted For: Illist

Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches,
You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz...............
...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,*
4...weak punch,didn't like how you had to explain it.
It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo
You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,**
3...again,didn't like how you had to explain.And the 1st line sounded forced wit the multis.
Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave,
Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave,
5....decent.
ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet?
Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...***
5...didn't like the intial usage in 1st line,as it didn't diss.But punch was decent...but..you shoulda worded it in a way in which u didn't have to explain it tho.

kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black!
6...nice.....wordin coulda been a tad better...but it wuz ite still.
This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin
And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten
5....decent,nothing spectcular,but decent.
I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide
A showing of art?..
Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade"
4...ehh...not really feelin it,honestly.Becuz it didn't seem to diss him much.
This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision..
Makin' noise in raps?
Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission!
6...good punch.

Black Arts...
Don't explain ya punches.I just hate that now.Cuz think about it..in real life..if ya spittin..would you stop 'n explain ya shit?No..so....try and make ya verses in a way you could spit in real life as well.The 2nd bar...where you rhymes fuckin homo with luck 'n no show...it sounded forced.Try to avoid that.And in the last bar...the way u tried to rip his name..it doesn't diss.Just cuz the 1st couple of letter in 2 words spill his name..it doesn't diss.
Illist...
Liked ya spit more.Still..you had a few flaws.The rained ya parade line didn't seem to diss much.And the popt art one wuz worded a lil bland in my opinion.

But Illist gets my vote for coming harder wit punches and having cleaner,unforced multis than Black.

Vote-Illist

But this was a good battle.I liked how you both use multis and shit...keep at it the 2 of you.
~1~

Voted For: Illist

Illist

kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black!
Lmao. This was cool..
This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin
And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten
Didn't connect..
I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide
A showing of art?..
Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade"
Nah..
This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision..
Makin' noise in raps?
Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission!
Pretty decent..

Black Arts

Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches,
You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz..............
...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches
Not a punch..
It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo,
You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,
Played out..
Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave,
Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave,
Forced.. flawed and floored sound nothing alike..
ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet?
Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check
I know this is a personal.. but these type of punches are played..

Overall, Illist had one good line, one decent line, and the rest were sub part. Black Arts didn't have any good lines or any decent lines. His verse was full with forced wordplay and played punches. Illist had two pretty original punches, along with some decent wordplay. So, in conclusion, Illist just came with the better overall verse. He had more quotables, better punches, and better wordplay.

Vote - Illist

Thx for voting people....
...uppin'





werd

Voted For: Black Arts

you did aight ...could of done bettr wit yo punches/wordplay .................................................. ........u did have sum ill rhymes and an ok vocab......but if u work on yo punches thatlll improve yo skilll v/black arts

who's verse are you even talking about? ^



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Voted For: Illist

v:Illist

Black Arts
Fuck name personals cos wack names equate to wack punches,
You bent like back hunches mayn i'm feeling like Nelson Muntz..............
...........cos me beating this cunt's like jackin kids for packed lunches,*
booooooooooo 0-10
It's like i'm buying gay porn cos i'm owning this fuckin homo,
You're flow's played like Kid's fade, fuck testin your luck n no-show,**
this one was nice 5-10
Born talentless, n we know you'll take it to the grave,
Flow so flawed/(floored) i'm using spatulas to scrape him off the pave,
tight second lines 6-10
ILLI-terate and ST-upid ain't you got to grips wit your L yet?
Nigga's only nightmare's tryna learn to use the spell check...***
werd his name is spelled wrong lol 7-10

overall i think u had nice concepts but some were played (that first line), u started off soft but ended hard like tha after-effects of sex

Illist
kid's all fiction.. like movies, Watch 'em get bitched wit facts
& It's safe to say you're gay..everyone's seen Men In Black!
lmaooooooooooo tight 8-10
This kid's fillin up w/ my punches, You know he ain't feedin
And Illist popt art so much.......you'd know he got eaten
this was a nice concept 6-10
I'm blowin the sparks, This fags still single.. needs man aide
A showing of art?..
Might have to cancel.... The way I just "rained on your parade"
wording? not good in second line 5-10
This kids a fraud, loosin' privileges.. While I floss precision..
Makin' noise in raps?
Only time you ever had allowed drop.. You lost permission!
serious close 8-10

overall ya verse had most categories, nice flow, good punches, nameplay a few times, okay wordplay, wording coulda been a lil better though...good shit altogether

VOTE: Illist

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werd.... thanks for returning the favor.. I'll hit up one of your battles in a bit.

ok i think u got thsi both need to work on that strucutre in places jsut showing love props
bumpppppp.

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