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01-17-04, 09:03 PM | #1 | ||||||
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just startin' out
IP: 6A02 D0E5
dont get down in a slum
i just do this for fun i dont plan on bein missed if anything i plan on bein dissed but the next thing im gunna say is gunna get you pissed so dont diss me i aint no mc it wont really bother me if i dont win just takin this shit for a spin but just remember, dissin me... its like a sin ill leave more marks on ya then them tattoos on ya skin so think before you spary and remember to watch whatcha say my shits hotter then Miami in may and when you respond make sure its not a bore cuz if it is ill have to hit ALT+F4 and thats it just tell me what ya think... |
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01-17-04, 11:18 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: 340D 8B8F
This wasnt all that good....you need to elevate here.....structure needs fixed up, try keeping the lines around the same length so its structured good....work on your content and topic ideas....try adding some multies to this to make it better....but keep at it.
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01-18-04, 12:13 AM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: 7FDF 14FE
good for beginnin..
dope cause....you aren't cocky which is a plus...i see potential... adding multis....a unique flow and scheme..and your set... props.
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