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10-09-05, 11:28 PM | #1 | ||||
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Vaskez vs. Makeveli Trained
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10-10-05, 07:56 AM | #2 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: D3CA AD7D
checkin in. Who the hell are you? hehe
let's drop early Mak, if we can
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-10-05, 09:00 PM | #3 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: D3CA AD7D
Bah, forget waiting for you to check in....
I'll make ya bleed with a kick, ya weaker than shit, while I'm meaner and sick They say you are what you eat, and you're always seen as a dick
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-11-05, 02:54 PM | #4 | ||||
Fuck Parents
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IP: EC3E 1DFA
hehehe, hey vasky
i'll drop in a few
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10-11-05, 03:02 PM | #5 | ||||
Fuck Parents
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IP: EC3E 1DFA
ha, this'll be fun..........
He may be my fam, but i still say FUCK YOU...ya not clever Truth is, ya only purpose in the crew is recruitin newer members
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10-11-05, 03:03 PM | #6 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: D3CA AD7D
Perhaps you should explain that we're in the same crew on RB
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-11-05, 04:59 PM | #7 | ||||
Fuck Parents
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IP: 3240 794D
^^^^well yea, you pretty much just said it for me lol
but yea, we both in AM....i kinda hinted at it in the set up but yea, w/e
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10-11-05, 06:38 PM | #8 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: D3CA AD7D
As dope as AM is, I'm not sure everyone on here knows us...but they will hehehe
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-11-05, 07:24 PM | #9 | |||
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IP: 20E3 4EAB
wow...weak battle but vote vaskez for adding creativity on his verse
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10-11-05, 07:30 PM | #10 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: D3CA AD7D
lol SOMEBODY didn't get punches why do you guys even bother? but thanks for the vote 1-0
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-11-05, 08:31 PM | #11 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
ACTUALLY READ MY FEEDBACK CUZ I'M TRYING TO HELP YOU HOES.
ok, I was not impressed here. Vaskez - Your line was PLAYED AS FUCK. And I HATE played lines. I saw you do a lot better in Jr. son. (Don't take that as an ego boost, I wasn't watching you in particular, I peep everyones battle on a basis) This line was weak though, maybe you didn't realise it was played though, either way, not very good. Try to stay fresh and just try to always know what is played and what is cool these days, cuz you have the ability to drop decent. I noticed you have been kind of slacking and you've been REALLY inconsistent in some battles. Actually put your effort, fine tune your verses, read it and say if someone else wrote this would I think it was good? And then you should be dropping pretty good all the time. Makaveli Trained - I seen you on RB and some of your shit here also, look, your good but ALWAYS inconsistent, you'll have a good battle, then a CRAP one, you'll have 3 good lines in a row and then a shit one. You know? Well anyways this week was your crap week so to speak. That punch was just plain terrible, the personal didn't even hit, AND that line is actually played out by wack noobies. Basicaly same shit I told to Vaskez. You should REALLY focus on spending MORE TIME on your verses, and fine tune them, and you should be good, remember, MORE TIME, make sure everything about it is good to you. Therefore, it came down to this Horible and played punch vs. Good punch but played So I gtg with Vaskez on this one. V/ The guy with that mexican name. |
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10-11-05, 09:08 PM | #12 | ||||||
Insane in the textbrain
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IP: D3CA AD7D
Who are you theory? Calling me son and shit, you talking like a vet.
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Fee Fi Fo Fum, now bitch I'm a giant And your ass is like Jack, but your magic beans is wack Skills is what you lack I'm like a Benz, you ain't even like a Cadillac Ya more like a Reagal I'm a pittbull and you's a beagel |
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10-11-05, 10:38 PM | #13 | ||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 591C A203
nooooooooooo, were not a vet, were random noobs. -_-
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10-12-05, 08:34 AM | #14 | ||||||
Coming to Kill you All
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IP: B4DB 82C9
neither came hot....but...
v/vaskez.. |
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10-12-05, 10:14 AM | #15 | |||
Skadoosh!
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IP: 9DB1 64D6
vaskez that was wack as fuck
the concept you used was played to fuck, i mean ure basically saying he eats dick which is a homo line and they are probably the most played out lines on RV and the added multi didn't help you any. MT....ure fuckin bar was weak as fuck to, i got the whole sorta punch you were going for after Vaskez made it apparent that you two are crew on RB, but still weak V/ - Makeveli Trained..........for not coming totally played!! |
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