Blah since two weeks i feel always down
like errbodys was against me,the world's upside down
My last life's souvenir will be alive underground
I feel like errbody's ignoring me,not reconizing my sound
But teres this one persone id like to thank to still be alive
My best friend cynthia,without her id still be drawing in my crys
Shes the one stoping those tears from my eyes,
Wheres the fun being me?i feel like in the disguise
Hidding from everything,from my friends,from the lights
If id lost her once,i dont think imma live this longer...suicide
Shes the only one listening to me,without her,i rather die

true story...if she wouldnt be in my life,i dont think id still be alive

yo please......

yo I like this...I feel like I shuldn't rate it cuz it's so personal nah mean but it was a good son...8/10...return to favor please

__________________

up............................

My last life's souvenir will be alive underground

^That was deep man.. I like that line....


Yeah like boy boy up there said this is a personal piece.. Nice emotion..
Put a lot into it... But I think some wordplay would've been nice nahmean?..
Keep the reader interested even if its a personal drop...
But this was nice man.. 1

__________________

very apreciate it.thx man

A shit was fire almost made Tony Green shed a tear lol! But it was hot I liked how you let everything out and said what was on your mind Tony Green give it a 8/10. Keep up the good work!

repay the favor check out my new O.M. "Still in Love" it has a audio hook!

__________________

Tony Green's Soundclick

iight i will,thanks for the feed

,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,