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B.I.Detained | 5 | 83.33% | |
AJ | 1 | 16.67% | |
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01-12-04, 07:11 PM | #1 |
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AJ vs B.I.Detained
IP: 1E6F 4F12
To explain me not battleing in six months. This is a new name, so naturally I signed up earlier thne October.
Anyway, rules: 10 Lines No Crew, Hate, D/R Votes. You Spit First. No Feeding. No Biting. Etc... This should be good, even know I am rusty, read well. Good luck to ya B.I.
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01-12-04, 07:13 PM | #2 |
Mona Lisa.
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IP: 9E53 07A2
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g'luk 20 mins drop rite afta me pz ------------------------------ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________ ____________________
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01-12-04, 07:34 PM | #3 | |
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Re: AJ vs B.I.Detained
IP: 9E53 07A2
Welcome bk..sniff..I knew ya were Bk
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huh..ya bin signed up that long & still Nobody Knows Ya ya can't be Sober..see AJ writes w/ an Alcoholic Jene.. coz yhisRhymes cunt spark Fire from a Dose of Carosene wot I mean..is..how du Cum Bk to a Merkin in an Instant Aj gets son'd e'where he goes..wel at least he's Consistent Damn sure not Resistant..coz 6 wins Rep his Cat Lives.. this Pussy gets Owned..on Knife edge from Blunt Knives he still Thrives..but still Dies..like Icarus chasing Blue Skies in my Eyes..Aj's Wings got clipped the 2nd he got in my Line
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01-12-04, 07:38 PM | #4 |
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The Fag Rejected From The Rejects Wannabe From The Projects
It's Time To Subject To The Object Known To You As A Prospect The Kids Anarexic Spitten After Pussy A Faggot to Be Asskicked The Kid Thinks He Quick Like A Crack Head Lookin For A Quick Fix He Flipped On kitkaT To Get Laughed At By A 0-10 Willy Nasdaq Terroist Strait From Iraq Commaco. His Own People By MisMatch I'll Have A Heart Attack Cuz Could Lack No Less Skill Like Slack Silhoutted In His Former Form Of Bri Speaks "NOOBS FORWARNED" Shuned And Scorned By Lack Of Knowledge By GrannyTranny Porn I.B Detained By His Impedasized Hanging Corpse Blood Stained
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01-12-04, 07:54 PM | #5 |
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wow that looks damn familiar^^^
not sayin ya bit but did ya Recycle?? anyways 1st ___________________________ ___________________________ ___________________________
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01-12-04, 08:00 PM | #6 |
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Yeah, I wrote that for a tryout a day ago. I thought it was pretty damn good so I kept it for further use. It's only the first 5 lines though. I will admit it, if I lose for that then let it be, but it is dumb. Oh well.
1st Uppin From Me...
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01-12-04, 08:40 PM | #7 |
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2nd Uppin From Me...
Come on people, this isant a bad battle, drop your links and your battles will be voted on.
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01-12-04, 09:25 PM | #8 |
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3rd Uppin...
Stop sleeping on this...100 Character Rule Is Cool.............................................. ....
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01-13-04, 09:59 AM | #9 |
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4th Uppin For Votes
Come on people, drop your links and we will get to your battles, a good battle here, don't sleep on it please.
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01-13-04, 01:53 PM | #10 | |
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aj i thought u blew ass none of ur shit made any sense and neither one of you can write
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01-13-04, 02:16 PM | #11 | |
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AJ...you lost me bro..maybe i misunderstood your verse.. but for the most part i just didnt get it..sorry..just being honest.. the flow was good and the structure was there..but i didnt get any of your punches i have been here a while and i have read a lot of battles..most of them i understand but i was completely lost...maybe you can explain wtf you were talking about.. but as it stands...i am confused... B.I. nice overall... fell off in some areas but you were pretty consistent.. you have elevated alot...since i beat you *wink*lol naw...for real good shit...flow was there..nice structure and nice punches...seen you do better..but u got the job done here quotables wot I mean..is..how du Cum Bk to a Merkin in an Instant Aj gets son'd e'where he goes..wel at least he's Consistent made me laugh.. no hat AJ..just didnt get most of your verse...
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01-13-04, 03:08 PM | #12 |
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B.I.Detained you have to many wins
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01-13-04, 07:13 PM | #13 |
Mona Lisa.
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wtf???
y the fuck is it 1-1 wen ya havent got a vote?? anyways uppin this shizznit 2nd _______________________________ ________________________________ ______________________________
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01-13-04, 07:40 PM | #14 | |
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IP: D27D 0B18
Vote B.I....overall verse was aight, you had some simple concepts a bit N only a few of ya punches relly hit in my eyes...but you caught the win no doubt....nice scheme N flow....
A.J your verse was alot of multis and just mainly rhymin words....i mean that's koo in a battle verse but there's no real punches.....i don't think you hit him enough to get you this win..... |
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01-13-04, 07:41 PM | #15 | |
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My bad i forgot to add this ish in when i was puttin up my vote but can y'all..............
Please return the fav on this battle if u may........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105811 |
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