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08-02-05, 02:20 AM
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Rap Vs Love. (Chapter 1-4) Ft J Trooper
IP: 2029 97B3
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=41790 http://community.rapverse.com/showt...eferrerid=41790 Chapter One-Animosity Loyalty My First Child In Life, And I'm Switching My Paste Momma Tripping And My Bro Bitching In My Face Eighteen Years Old......And I'm Choosing My Prime I Don't Try My Best So Am I Really Losing My Mind And I'm A Daddy So It's Kind Of Hard Raising A Kid Damn I Keep Getting Drunk And Still Blazing Up Shit I'm Out Of Choices, And I'm Running Low On Options I Love Her, But I Feel Like Running Her For Adoption I Got A Heart Feeling.. That I'll Be A Bum On The Ride Girl Is My Life, Even Though...I Got One On The Side And Counseling Won't Work Cause I'm Hurting Inside Got This Feeling In My Gut And It's Merking My Pride All I Know Is I Got To Make It.. For My Family's Sake And I Won't Stop Rapping Till They Handing Me Cake I Know I've Got Talent.. But My Girl Won't Support It Trying To Giving Her Everything But I Can't Afford It I'm Passing Opportunities Like Crazy And I Can't See And I Know If I Make A Mistake I'll Be Out Camping Cause My Girl Got A Problem With Me And My Music And I Won't Yell At Her But Please Don't Confuse It Up Late Writing, When She Asks, I'm Mixing My Lies My Excuse Twisting The Truth I'm Still Fixing My Ties If Rap Was Raising A Kid, It Won't Be Worth My While So It's Time For Me To Start Working With My Child . . . . . . . . . Chapter Two-Troop & Loyalty Troop Who is Troop? An UnMaterialistic Missphit? Well Kinda? That Close 2 a Felon?..Bodies..Yea they Gotta Find Um But Until The Realization Of Fingers United 2 Congratulate He Jus a Tad Bit 2 Late..To be able to Relate to Infatuate That Hes a Bredgrin Short of a Legend Cant Hurt Wealth Troopss So Local..that He Hasent even Hurd of His Self Lifes full of Entaglements.. like an Anaconda Sex Setting So i Constantly.. Brush Off my Past as if i was Shedding Take a Second 2. Acknowledge the Politix in our History How Quickly He Adapted to the Drasticks still a Mystery Thats Not Semi Near to being Secured.. and Embraced Because in His City..Tha Other day..Kid got De-Faced For Living in Right Time and Wrong Place is Realization Troop Refuse to Get Chalked Wrong Liked the Fabric Material....... during a ReAh.Taileration And his Soul is Dissolved and Grunged Out like Slip Knot Word is May 24th 1986..And His Mom Birthed Hip Hop . . . . . . . . . Loyalty Now He's Back With Chapter Two, Speaking The Truth His Life's Like A Ham, And He's Being Beaten Into Two He's Onto Rapping So Much....He's Forgot About His Kid So He's On The Verge Of Losing It If Continues His Shit And He's Confused, Cause The Rap Is Taking Over Him But He Know's He's Got To Make It.....In Order To Win And He's Got To Prove Him Self To Be A Soldier Again He's Drowning In Sorrow, But He's Way Over The Rim Dude's Admitting Everything So He's Flowing With Jim And He Feels Animosity Inside...But He's Holding It In He's Writing Chapters For Shit Cause It's A Frozen Pen The Ink Won't Eject Shit, So He End's Up Posting Again So He Ask's Jimmy P If He Could Coach An Old Friend His Skills Underrated So He Know's He's Chosen As Ten While His Girl's In The Bathroom.... Fingering Her Self He's Depressed While His Body's Lingering With Help His Kid's Screaming While Managers Trying To Job Em' He Keeps Telling His Girl Bull Shit Lying Is His Problem Cause My Girl Want Sex, But I Don't Feel Like Fucking If He Stops Writing, He'll Be A Hillbilly And Trucking His Girl Doubt Em Making It To See How His Shit Works So He's Writing Lines While Waiting Till His Kid Burps And He's On His Way To Fortune Looking To Get Signed He's Broke And They Say We Not Looking For Shit Rhymes . . . . . . . . Chapter Three-Loyalty Animosity Now My Life's Out Of Order..... Like Coke Machines Cause My Girl Support Me With Only Broke Dreams And My Kid Don't Know Me, I Can't Even Carry Her I Barely See My Girl So Why Did I Even Marry Her I Know I Love Em Both, But I Got To Do My Music But I Know I'm Not The Best, But I Don't Abuse It And I'm A Daddy, Even Though I Don't Seem Like I Love My Family And All But I'm A Fiend To Write I Don't See Her For Day's I Know I Will Eventually No Counseling Cause I Don't Need The Pill Mentally I Can Feel It, She's Checking Up On My Phone Calls A Man A Part........ But I Got To Hold My Own Balls Dinner Time...I Won't Eat...I'm In Depressed State Don't Shower For Days, But I Refuse To Rest Late Now I'm Stuck With Out Love Cause My Rap Dream While My Girl's Friend In The Background Laughing And I Don't Need Any Help Cause I Know I Got Mines I'm Writing Rap For Shit....Just Letting Ink Rot Lines My Hearts Cold As Ice.. But I Struggle To Make It If You Knew My Personality You'd Realize I'm Naked Abortion Almost Occurred, But We End Up Keeping It Dear Diary: He's As Stubborn As,Kept On Reading It But I'm Not Here To Share, But Exposing My Life See If Rap Was A Journal, I Could Never Close My Diary Chapter Four-Loyalty Loyalty Back To Day One When He Was Five Years Of Age His Father Left Em', And He Cried.....Tears Of Rage Smearing The Ink In His Diary,Tears On The Page That's How He Became It, And Fears Of His Ways It's A Fight Between His Baby's Love And His Rap He's Stress, Even When His Girl's Rubbing His Back Cause His Dad's Disappearance...Showed Him Shit But Now He Got His Own.......& He's Growing A Kid And His My Girl Need Therapy She's Throwing A Fit His Heart's Cold So You Know He's Holding His Clip Drunk Off Of Whine Coolers.... And Holding His Rib Cause His Liver Hurts In Pain So He's Holding It In He's Viewed The Edge Once, But Never Went Over His Personality Is Split So, He's Like A Bent Soldier Most Underrated In Talent, So He's Not Making It He's Shy At Times, But Over All He's A Naked Kid Get's No Publicity, So Sound Click Means Shit Now His Dreams Bin Paralyzed, So His Dreams Sit Down Now It's Nightmare's And He's Troubled And Blind And His Brain's Confused So It's Struggle In Mind Now He's A Cigarette Attic, Cause He's Stressing He Views Opportunities But Pause In Depression In The Presence Of Him, But He's Passing Himself He Seams Fine... But He's Really Asking For Help
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08-02-05, 02:25 AM
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RV aint Dead
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IP: 4046 092D
why is people tryn ta have chpts ta dey shit
be original
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08-02-05, 02:26 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: FFBA C081
Bitch u gotta Chpt in yo sig
dumb fuck lol @ J Trooper
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08-02-05, 02:33 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
You Faggot I've Bin Doing Chapters Since Forever...And Chea J Trooper Was A Dope Name I Think You Should Go Back Man
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08-02-05, 03:04 AM
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RV aint Dead
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IP: 4046 092D
no beef i'm just say when i posted ma shit up
dats when i seen ppl start do'n chpts
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08-02-05, 03:15 AM
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~Break Bred or Play Dead~
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IP: FFBA C081
Kid this was Done Months ago....
your late...
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08-02-05, 05:15 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
Chea long Time Ago Man
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08-02-05, 08:14 AM
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
yo tahts mad nice yall very good job form the both of yall both had everything in there man from structure flow to lines that were amd good mad very good job really liked reading it especially how yall put them in chapters mad hott.....man keep them up yall....
. . . PLZ RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE......IN MY BATTLES.....THNX IN ADVANCE.....
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  STARTING 2MORROW I WILL BE TRIPLE SIXES THATS GON BE MY NEW ACCOUNT SO THATS ME AIGHT CUZ IM SO FLY......LOL |
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08-03-05, 12:51 AM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
Aiight Man Bump Bump
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08-03-05, 04:12 PM
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This is my first post!
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IP: 2029 97B3
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08-04-05, 09:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 0825 899A
yo this right here was tight man extremely tight nothing but sickness......very good emotion......good imagery good story telling........good vocab and multis.......please rtf on my o/m Masked Disguise.....thanks
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