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RE$TRICTED 5 83.33%
gotaasswhoopin4U 1 16.67%
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Old 05-11-04, 06:52 PM   #1
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From: Jerz.....
Me Vs That Lyrical Champion Guy...restricted

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Old 05-11-04, 06:53 PM   #2
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Old 05-11-04, 07:03 PM   #3
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
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.::Check In::.

You Got 15 Minutes To Spit Kid....

Lets Go...

After You Spit I Will Drop My Ish

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Old 05-11-04, 07:39 PM   #4
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DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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Damn Kid..Take Years To Post Up 10 Lines LMAO..

Where THe Fuck You At?

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Old 05-11-04, 07:51 PM   #5
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Murderous Methods.......ill Murder Ur Methods/
R Rated, Nah......its Gon Be Triple X's When I Have Ur Mouth On The Pipe Of My Weapon/
Im Rbs Number 1 Selection/
I Gotta Wear A Condom On My Face To Give Mcs Protection/
Im A Main Ingredient, U Jus A Preserve/
U Aint Even Nice, U Sound Hot Cus U Use 10 Letter Words/
The Kid Is The Nicest, To Beat U Its Effortless/
Cmon Man Up, Ur Body Pumps Gallons Of Estrogen/
Dawg I Spit Rhymes From The Belly Of The Beast/
The Answer Isnt Can I Beat Ya Whole Crew, Its Who Lost By The Least/

Sorry I Took So Long, My Aunt Had To Use The Comp
But There It Go, So Spit That Piff
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Old 05-11-04, 07:51 PM   #6
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Whoops In The Last Line Its The Question Not Answer
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Old 05-11-04, 07:55 PM   #7
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Aiyo...

This Herb Challenging Me, Kid Must Be Requesting Death,
Feeling These Punches, When They Knocking Ya Heart Out Ya Chest/
Ya You Might Have Big Balls, But The Brain Is What U Lacking,
Need A Smack'N, Two Lyrical Punches, Got Your Dome Cracking/
Can't You Hear The Crowd Laughing, Knowing The Result Of Me and You?,
Shit Kid, I'm Spitting Just To Burn You, Like Adding Salt To Wounds/
I Know Its A Challenge, To Match My Spit, Let Alone To Beat It,
Know I'm Concieted, But Honeslty Your No-Match Kid, Can't You See It?/
I Know You From Jersey, BUt Damn Kid Your Style Is Mad Throwback,
Your Punches Thrown Wack, Listen To Me, Fuck This Site Just Dont Come Back/

Cut This Kids Mic Source!!

~R~

 
Old 05-11-04, 08:16 PM   #8
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Golly Its Gully
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Old 05-11-04, 08:25 PM   #9
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dude, Restricted took this one easy.
gotta, your spit was aiight, but your flow was a little off in some places. Try gettin' each line to have even syllables. Your punches were aiight, but none hit that hard.

Restricted, you had an awesome verse. Your flo was off da hizzy the entire way. lol You had some hard hittin' punches and your opener and closer was great too.

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Old 05-11-04, 08:34 PM   #10
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well there is no way that restricted didnt take this
gotta ass:
you were to basic to go up agaisnt some one as elevated as him
u need better structure
better flow
better punches
bestline: your opener
worstline:The Kid Is The Nicest, To Beat U Its Effortless/
Cmon Man Up, Ur Body Pumps Gallons Of Estrogen/
Dawg I Spit Rhymes From The Belly Of The Beast/
The Answer Isnt Can I Beat Ya Whole Crew, Its Who Lost By The Least/
work on all your stuiff and just elevate homie
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restricted
u took this easily
u had good punches
good flow
and i like that structure its tight
nice battle
betslines:Ya You Might Have Big Balls, But The Brain Is What U Lacking,
Need A Smack'N, Two Lyrical Punches, Got Your Dome Cracking/
and~~~~
I Know You From Jersey, BUt Damn Kid Your Style Is Mad Throwback,
Your Punches Thrown Wack, Listen To Me, Fuck This Site Just Dont Come Back/
goos shit good job to both
my vote
re$tricted
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Old 05-11-04, 09:21 PM   #11
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Murderous Methods.......ill Murder Ur Methods/
R Rated, Nah......its Gon Be Triple X's When I Have Ur Mouth On The Pipe Of My Weapon/
Weak opener, and very stretched...
Im Rbs Number 1 Selection/
I Gotta Wear A Condom On My Face To Give Mcs Protection/
Good concept but not really a punch...
Im A Main Ingredient, U Jus A Preserve/
U Aint Even Nice, U Sound Hot Cus U Use 10 Letter Words/
Good Personal....
The Kid Is The Nicest, To Beat U Its Effortless/
Cmon Man Up, Ur Body Pumps Gallons Of Estrogen/
LOL....This one could have been worded better but you get the point...
Dawg I Spit Rhymes From The Belly Of The Beast/
The Answer Isnt Can I Beat Ya Whole Crew, Its Who Lost By The Least/
OK closer...

This Herb Challenging Me, Kid Must Be Requesting Death,
Feeling These Punches, When They Knocking Ya Heart Out Ya Chest/
Weak opener....
Ya You Might Have Big Balls, But The Brain Is What U Lacking,
Need A Smack'N, Two Lyrical Punches, Got Your Dome Cracking/
Gay...
Can't You Hear The Crowd Laughing, Knowing The Result Of Me and You?,
Shit Kid, I'm Spitting Just To Burn You, Like Adding Salt To Wounds/
No real punch there...
I Know Its A Challenge, To Match My Spit, Let Alone To Beat It,
Know I'm Concieted, But Honeslty Your No-Match Kid, Can't You See It?/
Once again, no punch detected...
I Know You From Jersey, BUt Damn Kid Your Style Is Mad Throwback,
Your Punches Thrown Wack, Listen To Me, Fuck This Site Just Dont Come Back/
Closer was weak because you rhymed the word Back with itself...


Overall I was very disappointed in this battle. Restricted is supposed to be the champ and all but he still has battles like these. He put up no effort whatsoever and it showed. The only problem with it this time is he actually had some halfassed competition. Gotasswhoopin4u came with some OK punches, a few were actually a bit amusing, but his flow was off in most places. Overall, not a bad verse for a newb. Restricted didn't really have any punches, but his flow was on point, from beginning to end. Too bad this is a battle.....

Vote - Gotasswhoopin4u

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Old 05-11-04, 09:33 PM   #12
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4U - Good spit man, had some good flow to it... and the punches wernt to bad.

Best Line - Im Rbs Number 1 Selection/
I Gotta Wear A Condom On My Face To Give Mcs Protection/

Worst Line - Murderous Methods.......ill Murder Ur Methods/
R Rated, Nah......its Gon Be Triple X's When I Have Ur Mouth On The Pipe Of My Weapon/

Re - Good spit man, you hard a harcore flow.. and your wordplay was pretty good.

Best Line - Ya You Might Have Big Balls, But The Brain Is What U Lacking,
Need A Smack'N, Two Lyrical Punches, Got Your Dome Cracking/

Worst Line - Can't You Hear The Crowd Laughing, Knowing The Result Of Me and You?,
Shit Kid, I'm Spitting Just To Burn You, Like Adding Salt To Wounds/

OVERALL - I gotta give this battle to re.. for better flow.. and better wordplay.. both punches were iight.. but re's flow was better. Gota work on your flow a bit and next time come wit harder punches and maybe even some personals.

VOTE - Re

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Old 05-11-04, 09:33 PM   #13
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LoL Are You Serious Kid?? No Punches??

Please Go Off A Cliff and Die LMAO...

Uppin

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Old 05-11-04, 09:36 PM   #14
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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^^^ Towards Enygma...

Kids Still Sour About Me Beating HIm For CHampionship

PLease Back Off My Dick Kid..

~R~
 
Old 05-11-04, 09:43 PM   #15
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ok easy winn by restricted gotaa u got a ass whoopen

nice drop doe but u still not ready 4 da big leauges but it was a nice drop

bestline-Murderous Methods.......ill Murder Ur Methods/
R Rated, Nah......its Gon Be Triple X's When I Have Ur Mouth On The Pipe Of My Weapon/

stretched but a ok drop

worsteline-didnt hav 1 other than stretching but it was nice drop

overall yo verse gets a 8/10

restricted-u killed him wit yo punches it was vicuious

bestline-
This Herb Challenging Me, Kid Must Be Requesting Death,
Feeling These Punches, When They Knocking Ya Heart Out Ya Chest/

hott start

worsteline-none

overall yo verse gets a 9.7/10

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