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01-01-05, 02:29 AM
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Admire
IP: 0825 899A
Admire ..Its some Jailbait Alliyah and some Too old R.kelly shit.. ..you too grown..whats petty is..I'm hearin it two tones.. ..I can wait to grow..but It'll be too long..you'll be too old.. ..Crushes or loving..is the different's between lustin and touchin.. ..seriously,you do not take me..I can't live this way.. ..you only know me for mixtapes..girls say cute..but which way.. ..you the age of marriage..I'm still on the half done hiccakys.. ..I cannot think of what to say..or approach..and how to do it.. ..i know for sure it won't work..you warm my heart I gotta cool it.. ..your name spoken alone suthens..oh...I know I'm foolish.. ..but this is a milestone of life..I'll soon grow through it.. ..I'm not sure If I going soft or growin up..even If I'm not old enough.. ..I exposed myself..I told enough..I can't give you money.. ..I truly Only know what a coin is..This to you is probably pointless.. ..this is interfearing my work..the point is..I can't take all this heat.. ..If I even tell you..you'd probably just say..aww you sweet.. ..you compasionate of feelings unlike girls from my age group.. ..and you mature..not the type to loosley say I hate you.. ..Like I said to you.. before You Are Almost perfect..if damn fully.. ..I guess Its Time I quit dreaming..and get a girl who can suit me.. EDIT:Just me Talking just in case you don't understand why I wrote this.. I'm really feelin an older woman..I'm sure It will never happen..I have no future plans of telling her.. because It'll only create problems..and make her uncomfortable.. I edited this,to let you know this is how I feel now and isn't just a random selection of emotions I chose to write about... peace (told you Buddha I'd do it)
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01-01-05, 02:35 AM
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.::Outside The Circle::.
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IP: CC3D AFAC
damn nice job homey.. and u spit this pretty much off the top.. i wouldnt call this a poem more of an open mic.. but either way tis dope.. good job.. and B i really think u should tell her.. its the net what u got to worry about... but damn this is nice.. can tell it really came from the heart. good job and keep it up...
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01-01-05, 02:36 AM
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Gods Of War! -yeah im one
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IP: C2DF 7A85
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A work of art my friedn. As good (if not better) than any other cat on this sit and any other proffesioanl rapper. BUT................ IT was boring as hell. Honestly i respect it for wat it was but i need to be carried along and without audio, you lacked it
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01-01-05, 02:37 AM
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The Rulers Back
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IP: 5510 817C
bitin my style yo.......................
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01-01-05, 02:38 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
damn Dex you caught me off gaurd with that 2nd Bar like whoa
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01-01-05, 02:39 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
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you got your girl in your avy foo!!!!!
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01-01-05, 03:39 AM
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IP: CC3D AFAC
lmao... dex dont know what he talking about..
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01-01-05, 04:56 AM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
DEX? omg wow.. u serious? 2 much New Years alcohol...?
back to the topic: I'm really feelin an older woman..I'm sure It will never happen..I have no future plans of telling her.. because It'll only create problems..and make her uncomfortable.. ^^^how old is this woman 5-10 years older than you? that R. Kelly part made me wonder.. But anywayz, you had a good flow as usual.. your content was really good.... structure nice as alwayz.. i didn't see a flaw, this is yet another heart-felt piece, nice emotion.. but u haven't told her?.... does she even know you have skillz like this? Well, coming from me- you got mad skillz, this is very nice as well as ur Absent open mic.. but yea, do you wanna collaborate some time topically? stay up.. and keep writing from your heart.. Lady...
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01-01-05, 05:00 AM
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IP: 0825 899A
about 6 I think
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01-01-05, 05:07 AM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
Dayum mami 20? if i was that age i'd be 1 year from bein able to drink.... lol....
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01-01-05, 05:11 AM
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IP: 74E2 4E7B
not tryna be funny with that post.... just stating......
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01-01-05, 06:32 PM
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IP: 0825 899A
yo Fiya you retiring? NOOOOOOOOOOO
uppin this poem which was for you anyway
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01-02-05, 12:24 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
^)___________(^
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01-02-05, 12:53 AM
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Banned: Biting
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IP: E6CD FBF9
ohh, dephy's in love
but this drop is fiya, so who's the special lady? |
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01-02-05, 12:55 AM
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IP: 3240 794D
you just said it lol............................fiya
she left though...bogus
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