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First text battle in 5 months

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237925
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237919
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=237923
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=238043

community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?p=31183478
community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=3118349

these links okay ?

Firstly you didn't even link to a thread, so you posted fake links.

Secondly, no. You have to vote on 4 battles in the LBL.

The appocolyps is comin hit you wit mo funk than a field of Onions
You couldn't stand up to my Bunions..this like Apollo to Dulf Lungren
You stuntin dude you gayer than Ugly betties Nefew so F-you
I'll flex you like WWF dude Im not the rapper you wanna step to
read a bible bitch cuz this kids about blessed dude leav im waitin for a rescew
I'll silence you like dissconnected phone lines it's chrome time
an you feelin it on line you couldnt rhyme wit a a copy of cat in the Hat
one rap colapsin ya lung crackin ya back detachin ya stats
face facts you wack you couldnt come up wit an Escalator
you pussy a perpitrator one blast this cat doin the pruculater
you vermin and Im Terminex the lyrical teriminator
you pussy I get in you like a monthly aplicator fuckin punk
probly bite more raps than an aligator Im ya daddy u Luke N Im Vader
I'll introduce you to ya maker finish u off then ask fo mo takers
you a punk the closes this cake came to pussy was his moms labor
savor the flavor of my nuts in ya pout this cake stay stuck in the house
Buddy just button ya mouth fo you get fucked in this joust

okay an those aint fake links I'll do right now

yo dont see no cmpleated battles at all what to I do?

Nick Fletcher whored you dawg, you'll only get ripped if you step up
Cause that was your best line & the punch was less of a diss than the set up
Shame about your old man, but when danger was near he couldn't hide
But just think...
...He was killed above the same sewers where your fucking career resides
I love Christmas time, Santa brings gifts from Seville to Texas
And your house is full of such a festive spirit it's like your paps was killed on Xmas
I'm drunk as fuck kid, you can smell the vodka on my breath
Cause I'm overcome by lethal shots like I was reanacting your brothers death
I’ll hit your head for a home run to smash up your face & spoil it
But the last time you hit some strong runs you fucking blocked up your toilet
It's pathetic, you're so poor and hungry it’s almost painful to feel
& I'd dish out the dirt on you but you'd be fucking grateful for the meal
You're on a tightrope between life and death & ya got nothin to gloat on
Cause you've always walked a fine line... but you've never actually wrote one
I don't wanna help you elevate, your ache and lumps are a disgace
Cause you've already got assist.... right in the middle of your fucking face

^^^you Mutha Fuckas Are Real Disrespectfull Of The Dead I Hope U Never Have To Go Through Shit I Went Through. But If Helps U Win A Battle More Power To U.

Shame about your old man, but when danger was near he couldn't hide
But just think...
...He was killed above the same sewers where your fucking career resides
I love Christmas time, Santa brings gifts from Seville to Texas
And your house is full of such a festive spirit it's like your paps was killed on Xmas
You're on a tighrope between life and death & ya got nothin to gloat on
Cause you've always walked a fine line... but you've never actually wrote one

VS.

Nothing.


Now, let me tell you why I didn't quote anything from K Illa so he says this is not a hate vote. Check it out, K Illa just had a verse full of multies to make a nice flow, but punchwise.. there was nothing. It was simply a bunch of statements like "shut the fuck up" or "i'm a kill you" or "i'm better than you" and that type of shit. In audio K Illa would be pretty decent, but text you need some originality, fresh wordplay and killer punchlines. You lacked in all those areas.
Appo, you didn't show any signs of ring rust. You came strong with a decent verse and most of your bars were ok. A couple of them were played concepts and I didn't quote them, like the dirt/meal line. Overall though, you killed it with the lines on his dad and brother.

V/ - Appocolyptik

i NEVER ONCE SAID iMMA KILL U OR IM BETTER THAN U WHAT U TALKIN ABOUT WHATEVER DICK RIDER IM NOT EVEN POSTIN LINKS I'LL GIVE U A WIN FUCK IT ALL YALL DID WAS INSULT PEOPLE THAT AINT AROUND ANYMORE

K Illa it was a text battle and if you have a concept as potentially harsh as your family members being killed then you'd be foolish not to use them. It was just a text battle after all and it's not like I know or have anything against your family.

And word Nick, I was pleased with my verse actually. I thought I'd have writers block like a bitch but the concepts flowed back to me like the good old days. And as I haven't battled insce June I don't really know what's fresh and what isn't at the moment so it'll take a couple of weeks to get back into it.

Thanks for the vote

Whatever Battle Me In Baller Status See If Those Silly Punches A Win I Don't Have Any Crew An No Homies In Bs It'll A Be Fair. I Don't Even Care Anymore About Winning A Battle On Hear Take Ya Wins. Fuck A Link Appo U Can Win With This Bullshit Dissin Two People That Aint Never Do Shit To One You Will Pay For Eventually

THOSE ARE LOW BLOWS AND IN A REAL BATTLE FACE TO FACE YOUD NEVER WALK AWAY THAT SHIT IS OUT OF LINE. NICK SAID HIS BRO WAS SHOT AND GRAN PARENTS AN NEICE DIED AND I DIDN'T YOUSE IT ONLY A EVIL DEVIL AS WHITE PERSON WOULD DO WHAT U TO JUST DID YOULL NEVER GET MY RESPECT